I thik that story is really good so far. I can't wait for the rest.Hurry up.=)

That is great but you do know Akito is not a he,right? Anyway that was great update please.

~Fai-chan

Loved the bit with Mit-chan and Shigure! It's been awhile since I've read a scene with them in any fic, which is odd since they're so great for comic effect. The KK ending was sweet and lovely, too. Nice chapter!

cyute... too wordy...

plot and all is nice, but i think you should edit it for run'ons and wordiness and little things like that..

other than that, its nice!

Wow, it's really been a long time since a new chapter of this came along, hasn't it? I loved Shigure's appearence; he's just wonderful for moments of comedy, isn't he? I like that Kagura has accepted that Kyou needs his space at times, it's really showing that she's growing both as a person and in a relationship. Good job!

You have a good idea and you got the canon characters down well. However, I think with your OCs, you should gradually bring them into the lives of Tohru and the Sohmas. What you currently did was just pound them into the series. Like, have a few experiences between them before having everyone get all chummy-chummy. With what you currently did, you're making them vaguely Mary-Sueish which for some people (including me), really turns a reader off to a fanfic.

Good story, hope you update soon!

i like it ^.^

You're writing style leaves something to be desired, but the premise is good. I'm not a fan of OC, but we'll see if I can cope as I read the later chaps

Kyou and Kagura's date was so sweetly written. I liked how you pointed out that the entire time passed without Kyou yelling at her, since that's a big accomplishment in their relationship. This was a cute chapter all around, although there seemed to be a few more typos than usual. If you don't mind, I'll fix those before I add it to Neko Ino. That aside, wonderful job with the new chapter!

More Kyou and Kagura sweetness here; you're just writing a lot of lately, aren't you? Having Kyou be surprised at Kagura's acceptance of his feelings is something that I thought was a nice touch. Not only has he been pushing her away for years, he also has a low sort of esteem when it comes to people loving him and letting him love them in return. It's a great idea that I hope more writers (or you) expand on. Excellent job, especially since it's been awhile since you've worked on this.

cute chappi! plz continue!!

Mm, very nice, very nice. Hope you write more soon

OH! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! this is tantalizing, u kno...

cute! ^^ that's realli creative! hope u write soon!

chiri