satisfyingly eerie... once again i love ur work.

AWESOME POEM! I loved it! it rocks!

you should write some more so i can read it! LOL

Rikku

Amazing poem! I would've never thought to write something from a Shadow Rider's perspective, so you most definietly achieved a sense of originality. And your ability to rhyme and make a poem work for you ... I'm becoming envious of your poetic skills!

You said you needed help? Well, I have tons of free time on my hands, so I can gladly return the favor. After all, you did help me when I asked, so I guess I should get researching, huh? But first, one little question: by the names and colors of unicorns, you mean ... well, never mind. I'll see what I can do. Bye for now!

Interesting! Real poetential here!

I like this poem. I kinda liked the Shifter one's better. This though helps us know a bit more about what the Shadow Rider is like. I dont remember much about him. This jogs my memory _. btw i changed my pen name, it had been The Demon Huntress Kit Nurimenshin but now its RSKnight. I hope you dont get confused with that lol. anyways good poem, keep up the good rhyming!