no! fowl doesn't do fear! no!

what the! stupid artemis. uh-uh.

yes i like! you almost got my eyes wet there.

Strange but too good to give up on! Flamer? What...?

*coughs* In Greek mythology, did you know that Artemis was female? And she had a twin brother named apollo? Good fanfic though, sorry bout that.

not bad...

Deviruchi~

I gotta say, mesmered!Artemis depresses me a lot. Poor guy. I was tearing up at that point. :'(

Poor normal!Artemis, too. Nothing is ever alright with that guy. I was a bit bothered by how, when he got his memories back, Artemis didn't seem to react to them other than the "Holly Short!" bit. I would've liked a little more recognition from him or at least something a bit more dramatic than a "yes yes, and what else happened?," you know? I don't even know what's up with Butler. Did he get full memory recall or what?

And though it sounds like I have a lot of gripes, I really don't. I like Artemis's character in this one. His wish to be normal is logical, since his exceptional intelligence is useless without needing to help the fairies or plot schemes to get money. It's indeed ironic that he loses his genius status right when the group needs it the most. I look forward to the moment when, perhaps, he pulls it back outta his ass and shoves it in the faces of Opal and Spiro. I look forward to it very much. x3

I wanted to finish reading this, but it will have to wait until tomorrow. I love the story. Your three characters are so original while also being completely believable!

what a great fanfiction! funny too! lol. great job, keep it up and update soon!

woah... this is pretty sweet... wats with the preppy dudes tho? you dont need them.. there just weighing artemis down... ahhg, oh well it still is a great plot n i expect an update soon! yes! so you better write more to your summer/christmas artemis fic!

I like it ! so sweet,cute and good !! it's funny that this story places just before crishtmas coz now is summer..

wow,really good,please continue:)
its great!
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Heck Ya!

Hikari: How's 'Heck Yea!' for you?

Artemis: ...I won't say it...

Hikari: *puppy dog eyes* why not? It's fun to say! You need to act more of your age!

Artemis: Translation: Act more like YOU.

Hikari: Exactly. Artemis seems a little angsty in this fic...I like it!

Artemis: You like me having angst?

Hikari: Yes, strangely, I find it interesting to read whenever you're in a life-or-death situation, Hunter.

Artemis: I know I've been saying this a hundred times, but, Hunter is better than Arty.

Hikari: Aw! Well, anyway, Update soon please! Artemis, use your puppy dog eyes! I think they're realy cute!

Artemis: *sigh* *gives realy cute puppy dog eyes* Pwease update soon!

Hikari: O.O; Holy crap! I've created a monster!

Artemis is normal now! I love it!
I love how you put all those emotions. How Artemis angsts! Ah! I love angst! So Go you!
Keep it going! You're doing a great job!