Parrot Post said it for me.
Borys

I like the story. Its unique.

Oh how sad! One question, Why are ecetera-cat and Companion Teva getting the "blame" for this? Good Story though. Good Job!

I know I'm a bit late on this one, but it seems unfinished to me. It's a very good story, nonetheless. It shows the unpretty side of a rejected Choice very well, I thought.

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this is really good! in a sad way...but i like it.

keep it up with your other stories!

ouch! that hurts... him beging the one that he saved. great story though. you are an awsome writer.

Wow.

Wow, this fic was very good. very very sad, but still very very good. :D

Very good, I liked it.

Wow. This is a very moving piece of writing, though not as blatant as some. It seems relatively simple to begin with, but there are some underlying emotions that take a few minutes to sort out.

...wow, that was incredibly depressing.

And yet, well-written and well-done. Good.

Aie... how dark, yet how well written. I like it, even though I don't really WANT to like it because of the content...

Depressing! And it's not my fault at all... -