V.gd story...pls write more

I like this story

Talk about the tension, I LOVE THIS! Its so cool! I feel so sorry for Cloud, soon he'll have to betray Leon, or if he fails Aerith would die. Even if Leon somehow escapes his fate, Aerith would die and Cloud would still be hurt. I feel so sorry for him T_T YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!

...ok..it's been a year now...you havn't updated... /

Love the story though.

hehehe I like where this story is going, hope to read more of this awesome story soon

This is a really intresting story, and I really hope that you don't abanded (sp?) it! Because its really cool!

this is a really awesome story! i loved chapter 4, its nice and different, but sad :( i just hope leon doesnt die

aw... i guess this storys dead cause u lost ur notes eh? R.I.P. then. that really sux, cause it was a really, really good one too... :( i hope u can get back to it someday.

Shit! Hurry up and continue, dammit!

I like your fluency and paragraphing. Very easy on the eyes. Story is intriguing, very much so. I rather wonder why it's not all awkward between them, considering that they shared a kiss, previously...

-pokes you-

please continue soon..

I'm dying here.

-points at a chicken pot pie-

OMGG.. omgg.. that was GOOD... omg, please continuee! i LOVEDD it! :D hahaa... they're so cute together, and i love the plot so far - they're both so hott. XD loll

God. GAH. I HAVE TO HAVE AN UPDATE. *dies* I'm serious, I only just started reading this fic again, and I'm hooked once again. XD *is turning into so much of a yaoi junkie* I've been very badly corrupted...

PLEASE UPDATE. And I promise, unless you want me to I will not criticise you. Actually, I'd be willing to do what I do to Tairako... We read and respond to each other's work with the most detailed responses we can think of...

GAH. Seirously. UPDATE.

Tally *dying*

XDD It took me a while, but I, the infamous critique, hath returned... and I'm so damn annoyed at myself for leaving this fic for a while. IT'S SO CUTE! But Hades should die. I don't care whether or not he RULES the dead- if he's keeping these two apart, he should die. Or at least be imprisoned with the Titans. *scowls*

Tally

Next chapter... XD I had to review to this one, and then forgot exactly what I was supposed to be reviewing... ack. *is tired*

Ne, Ne, I wanna see what happens next

I can't wait for the next chap.

Sorry for not reviewing sooner but my computer was messed up. I still love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!