I really, really, REALLY like this story. Please continue it!

An interesting story idea, and using Sigyn and Loki as enemies fits perfectly as following a story arc containing the Lord of Terror, who was both Nostradamus's prophesied destroyer and actually Fenrir/Fenris- Loki's offspring (though given that he was a computer program this may be figurative in the OMG setting).

The last chapter IS exposition heavy but it fits nicely with the traditional "bad guys explain everything right before the end" theme found in a decent amount of Buffy and OMG plots.

:-).

Good chapter. Great to see this story continued. :)

ara ara ara... so u're still alive after all!

didn't thought u would update this after so long, but it was a good surprise.. a VERY good surprise in fact!

Would like to see Urd kickin' Mara's butt, but it wasn't possible!

Anyway, i'm anxious to see what happens next.. pls update!

ja ne

This is the best fanfiction i have ever read. it's amazing how the characters are so detailed. I really dont think anyone could do a better job at writing this. its so magically funny and i cant wait to read more.

Sonofa...this has got more pop culture references than a Kevin Smith movie! And this is just the first chapter?
So far, this is the best written fic I've seen in years. Characters are dead on, scene setting is nice, pacing's a bit slow but I guess it's because there's a lot of characters coming into the plotline.
Must...read...more...chapters!

SPOILERS FOR MYSTERY CHILD TPBK.
I don't mean to nitpick but Belldandy seems a bit out of character. It's not in her nature to kill not to mention the Gods in OMG Canon are forbidden to kill demons and there is a system set up to prevent such actions from taking place.

...wow.
That's all I can say. This is a model of how Crossovers should be done.
Wonderful _-
Keep up the good work!

I like this fic. I like Ironman, too, BTW. One of my faves. Also, Lorne's bar is called Caritas, not Carasis. And the song is "Rock the Casba." And you had some grammatical errors in here too. But other than that, it's great.

Hey, it's very good to see this piece updated. It's very good. Pls write more soon, i'm anxious to see what happens.
ja ne

Keep Writting its brilliant !

Hello,

I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed your story quite a bit. I am waiting eagerly for more. There are a few typo and spelling mistakes here and there but overall very good mechanics for a fanfic. The main comment that struck me was that this fic may get more exposure if it was placed in the Buffy Xover section of this site then in the OMG section. Plus it could spark some interest in Buffy fans that have not had the oppurtunity to watch OMG. IMO the more people we (we as in current anime fans) can get interested in anime the better it is for everyone. Nice endnotes by the way. It's interesting to see where you get some of your inspiration for these little cultural references you like to put into your story...I'm also a big Ranma 1/2 fan so the Ryouga vignettes were just great. I only wish we got to see Ryouga kill a vamp. A comment along the lines of..."Kuso, I thought that theses things only showed up in the Transylvannia Prefect" coulda been funny. But that's just me. Great job and thanks.

This is the only BtVS/OMG fic I've seen, and I'm not disappointed. But since you've already heard the good things, then I can skip them and go directly to the bad.

First of all, I'd like to know where you got your facts about the Norse Mytology from. To me, they seem a little odd. Sure, they're more accurate than OMG or Valkyrie Profile, and most other fics for that matter, but small details seem hastily looked up or maybe remembered not all correctly. Skuld, for example, means future. And I wonder why you made up the lost volume of the Edda, since you can read about that stuff in the existing one.

Second, a small matter of translation. While I don't know Norweigan specifically, I do understand it, as I'm Swedish. The word "appear" would indeed be translated as "vise seg," but in the context, it doesn't fit. If you would translate it backwards again, literally, it would be "show oneself" (or him/her/itself), but I assume you were searching for "show yourself," which would be "vise deg." I'm almost sure of the spelling, since in Swedish it would be "visa sig/dig."

Other than that, I've been enjoying the story, and I hope you'll finish it. I could point out that I think the gang reacted a bit too harshly on Angel about the Norweigan episode, since both vampires and Mara were actually saving the world from Ragnarök. I'm with you on all those bad BtVS/SM fics, since the only one worth mentioning would be Yellow Roses, in my mind.

I love your story. It's very well written and is a very original crossover. Please write more and update soon. I can't stand it when people don't update.