Such a shame that it has been 5 years since this story has had an update. What a fun plot. I wish there were more.

Oh, I hope you'll update someday. Your idea is really great and worth writing :)

please tell how dead will creevy be when snape gets home. this premise is unigue and intriging.

interesting twist, but time travel fics are always funny :)
cool story, keep it up :)

Lovely series of stories, but I just wanna pick on something here.

In 'Gifts' you say that Harry defeated Voldemort several months AFTER Harry's seventh year, but in this story you say that the final battle happened a month before Christmas IN Harry's seventh year. Theres like a years difference. Not consistant, but still nice.

Heh. I did NOT see that coming. :P Fabulous.

Anyway, I personally like the past storyline better. I like to see how things are changing, while imagining how things happened in the original timeline. It's very interesting, and a bit convoluted. Hee!

Yami

I'd say it's not getting the reviews because the previous one isn't finished. I personally have this "thing" about reading stories in order, even if the author says it can be done otherwise. Finish the previous story, and this will have greater readership, I can almost guarantee it.

Otherwise, I don't think it's worse or better than the others so far. I'm actually rather curious as to what will happen, and how it will change the future, if at all. One thing you have to be careful about in time-travel, because it gets all complicated, is paradoxes. If things change, and Collin isn't there at that moment in the future and Ginny hasn't given her wand to Tabby to play with, or Tabby doesn't exist, then Tabby won't send them back in time to mess with the future in the first place. If that makes any sense.

So, just a word of caution involving time-travel: be careful. Oops, that's two. :D

Yami

Again I love this write more please

Oh Merlin, I’ve been with her not five minutes and she’s broken!"

"She’s not broken." Snape mocked. He gingerly reached down and pulled her up by the back of her jumper, setting her on her feel. She went limp and collapsed to the floor, still wailing, the second he let go. Snape watched her slump down. "Dear lord, you did break her!"

"What do we do?" Harry tried picked her up again, but she stayed limp. "She’s floppy, they’re not supposed to be floppy. Floppy is bad!"

lol!
PLease write more!

Whoh! Please add more quickly!=D

Why oh why isn't there anymore of this delicious fic? Why have you stopped writing? (sniffles) This is one of my fave snarry plots, when they have children together. And the children are simple adorable! I love the scene when Tabitha asks Snape to 'smell her icecream' Oh the cuteness! And also when Harry smirked at Sev for the fish voices and for Severus kissing tabby's boo-boos away! Aw...sweet! Haha, plus Sevrus suddenly acquiring a babybump! Mwahahahah!

oh dear gawd, when are you going to update your gift stories? it's really amazing! update please!

It's been two years and still waiting for an update - please don't leave poor Severus hanging on any longer!

I wish you had finished this. I know that original characters don't tend to go over well. But the way that you used them more a plot device to place the other characters into interesting situations or for comic relief seemed to work very well. So I do hope that you will continue with this, as I'm very interested to see where you're going.
Waiting for more,
~Ly

Awesome.. please please update.. i love your stories!

MtM