...Wow...that does remind me of Silent Hill...

You didn't mean for it to be for SH? Wow, it sure fits it. It's really good... It could even pass as a song or an intro to a story. Heh, multitasking poem.. Oo.. typo..

Excellent work. This is a great poem, which totaly captures the mood of the games. I'm normally not one for poetry and am very picky about it, but i can't find anything wrong with this.

Wow. This was awesome! I loved it.

Wow, this is so good! You are so talented!

Nice work here. It could be written for Evil Dead as well. I like the way that you captured the essence of Silent hill here. Invisible menacing enemys waiting at every turn to rend your flesh from its bones. A nightmare that is inescapable and reoccuring. A lack of hope. Solitude. All these things are covered. A job thoroughly well done.