Beautiful. I really enjoyed this. It makes sense, and was a bit sad. In character though. :)

Nice:)

you, my friend, should feel special- to have written such an intimate fic that i not only finished reading, but actually wanted to review. finding something like this that's /not/ completely smutty is almost impossible, and i'm so fickle about it that even one wrong sentance can completely throw me off and make me stop reading. but with this one, i was so completely drawn in and captivated that i kept on reading, thinking "please, please let me get through this one without running into some crude statement that throws off the spell of the whole thing" and for once, i wasn't dissapointed. the story left me with a sort of heavy, sweet sadness i hadn't expected. against all odds and expectations, i really, really liked it!^^ congrats!

Darn...and aww, sweet. Sorry...:P

This is the one thing i saw about thestory that caught my eye. It was that your story was shorter then expected if you had done the same thing would you have gone longer reveling in each others touch or try to end like its too holy for you but other then that its well written

Oh wow... beautiful fic.. honestly.. just beautiful *applauds* A wonderful read, and I loved the way you wrote it... outstanding!

o.o ... deep and beautifully written.

ha ha, somehow I feel like I could relate to this. It's a really nice theme--Winry urging Ed to take initiative and control. This is well written, not only that, it stirs a lot of emotions and conveys a real tenderness between the 2 characters.

^.^ sexy! good job!

You..are...not...God...but prety freakin close.

aw, that was sweet. I ride too, and I loved the references!

All I can say is that that was beautiful.

So good and sad! Please update (hopefully this wasn't a one shot right?) this was very very very very good ^_^

please update soon!! htis chapter wsa great!!

I love you. This is an amazing piece, it had me like inches from my computer screen I was so into it. Beautifully written, the characterization is so deep and perfect, and the words just flow. I can only hope to be able to write like you.