This is really cute! I love the fluency of your words, and I can very much imagine how the characters are feeling. Basically, the imagery is great, and this will definitely become one of my favorites!

This is really a cute story maybe a 2nd chapter ? : )

Very cute. I like stories about a progression in their relationship. :)

Aw, how adorable!

A fine piece of work! _

Yes, I'd love to see another chapter on this to have this lunch last longer.

Very sweet, but in character.

I like it! Its so cute :P

Very cute vignette. You write quite well. The only 'but' I can give to this is that it has very little interest for those who aren't fans of this couple.

this is the sweetest NaruHina fan fic i've ever read! u make it sound so real! you are a really good writer! keep it up!