Ah. Little things.

I finally got around to really reading this through. Love all the introspection, though it seems messier than it was in the first chapter...?

Certainly Violet's seen Tony in those WEEKS-or has nothing happened?

Update when possible... This is a really awesome story...

(Not surfer-dude "awesome," the real one. "Awe-inspiring.)

I'm really loving this so far. Please get the next chapter out soon.

Splendid work. Really. Just swell.

I think I'm depressed now. I see that its a very introspective look of Violet Parr/Incredible's life and therefore has very little dialogue.

However, it's still very well written and has left me wanting more.

Nice Story. Its very well written and captures Violet well. You sound perfectly natural writing as a girl, even though your bio says your a guy (yes, i do read them!).

If you want to, i can look through things or can give you advice on 'girly things'. its just an offer, if you would like some advice.

Not that you need it because this is a realy will written story!

I look forward to the next chapter!

Another good chapter. Nice commentary on school life.

Lovin' this, keep up the good work!

Your first chapter is still the best even when the 2nd and 3rd ones combine together to give an overall effect. It is difficult to explore Violet's character at such depth effectively. When I say effectively, I mean the effective overall impression it leaves on the reader. I believe one shots actually explore them more effectively than a full length story devoted to it.

I would classify your fic as a character study because it doesn't have much of a plot whatsoever. Character studies are not expected to have plots and will drag out badly, in my opinion, if they drag on for too long. They just lack a plot to carry them through.

There are many excellent character studies and coincidentlly they are all one shots. Examples would be littesoprano's studies on Elastigirl and DBZincredible's one shot on Violet. AND also your 1st chapter. They are like shots of morphine injected directly into my bloodstream.

I think you should have stopped at the first chapter right now, but of course I would like to see where this story's going since you continued. A valiant and magnificent attempt nevertheless.

o.O; I'm sad. Why did Tony cancel? Ack, I want Violet to be happy...

Poor Violet. Why Tony never showed up? I don't know. This fic is great! Sad yet awesome. You really have a way with words. One thing that I'm missing is the dialogue. This fic has like none. But it's great nonetheless. Anyway, hope you'll continue soon!

aw...poor violet. do we find out what happened with tony later on?

Wow! The story is great...and the disclaimer too! Not too many people pay attention to disclaimers, i know, but urs is great!

Good story so far. I liked your insights into Violet. I look forward to the next chapter.

I'd add some constructive criticism here, but I can't think of anything that needs improvement, save that updating the story slightly more often would be really, really nice.

I like your writing, especially this story. Keep going.

This is the kind of story I have been searching for and have finally found. Finally someone is looking into the emotional impact super hero work would have on the Parr children. Great first chapter. The emotions and thoughts Violet had throughout the chapter were portrayed very well. Great beginning.

Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please!