"She was bound with chains and heavy locks to a cross with a strange, scary man on it."

Wait, so the dark god of Silent Hill is restraned by Jesus?

...wow, score:

Jesus: 1

Samael: 0

Jesus: heh, I nailed it, but don't be cross about it.

Samael: FOOL, when the 21 sacraments are done, I WILL *gets hit with a rock*

Jesus: what do you think I ment when I said "let he who is without sin cast the first stone"?

Loved your monsters.
Loved your story.
It sucks to be in the SHPD.
And thats all for now.

Sucks to be them.
"Never die in Silent Hill," was something I'm sure the brochure deliberatly left out.
One more chapter to go.

Douglas is cool.
I wonder why he found his 'son' in the ground?
Sorry about the delay in reviews.

Well, thats it for me tonight.
Vincent is starting to turn into the little bugger we know and love.

I find it kind of strange that Vincent would like Claudia in the past, but whatever you think happened.
...Onward!

Back again.
Where did his revolver go, I wonder?
Whoever took it must have good tastes-revolvers rock!
This is shaping up to be good.
I wonder what that red stone is?

...and the reason she didn't want to bring Leonard in was why?
Very subtle Dahlia. 9_9
Anyway, another good chapter.
I'll start again tomorrow.

Well, thats one way to perform a coup'.
I wonder what changed Vincent?
Anyway, good writing here.

So, if Claudia and Walter had something to do with the cleansing, I think I know what happened to Midwich School.
...
Meh, don't like kids much anyway.
I like how you're taking a look into the beginnings of the whole fire incident, but I was under the impression that Dahlia was mean to her daughter (that was my impression from the first game).
Well, we all have our interpretations.
Onto the next chapter then.

Nice look into Alessa's life. No child is depressed all the time (unless its in Naruto, but thats a different story).
A black coat with a line down the middle?
For some reason, it makes me think that Scamp is the precursor of the DoubleHead, but thats just me.
I'll be back later, but now I've gotta clean out the garage. XP

Hey I got time to review! It was a great chapter. I think it was more interesting than the last chapter. I loved how God's messenger came down to Dahlia telling her to burn Alessa and the part with Walter, it really is a great opening for the actual games. It is so interesting to hear your point of view on what happened in the orphanage because mine would be a lot different and it is good to hear another point of view. I like the involvement of the police officers, it creates a sense of realism about the fic.

I can't wait to read on and I hope you update soon! Don't leave me hanging to love.

Woe, what a long chapter. I started to read it last night but didn't get time to finish it so I'm reviewing today, on my first day off from work in a while! Anyway it was excellent. I have only one complaint. I think it should be more spaced out since it is such a long chapter and becomes harder to read the less spaced out it is. I think the path to salvation that John and Nathan were taking was excellently written. I loved how you added the Pyramid Head's for a great effect. I'm wondering will either of them get into heaven but I am doubting it very much so. I also loved the small paragraph in the prison. I'm not entirely sure what the prison has to do with it but I will wait patiently to find out.

By the way I updated yet again and I hope you decide to review. Your reviews mean a lot to me because they are so honest and help a lot with my writing. I will understand however if you don't want to continue reviewing.

I'll go and read the last chapter now! I may not get time to review but I will later!

Well you told me not to flame you about putting Douglas in the story but I just have to say that I think it is a bit too neat... sorry :( Everything else in the story is excellent though. I love how you describe the Dog going bad and the officers smile as he was dead, that was so disturbing in a good way. I am wondering what the creature was at the end of the chapter. What will happen to Father Wolf? I am dying to know all this and I'm wondering how Alessa will start to hate the world enough to start the paradise! Well done you have me hooked!

Oh you keep me guessing. This chapter was excellent and I could imagine everything. I'm wondering what Vincents plan really is and is he going to succed. I can kinda see where the fire will happen now, well I think I can. I loved the whole thing, especially the part at the lake where Dahlia sacrificed the two bodies. It is excellent. Keep updating! I will return to review more tomorrow when I am less tired!