 A Concerned Citizens 6/9/04 . chapter 1 Corny! What an *original* idea. Cough cough. Try killing off other people.
Mwahahaha! I flame you *burn*
Really, if you're going to do a character death, make it something a little more, shall we say, realistic. Yes some of it is realistic, but the whole angel thing. I mean, it's not like I don't believe in angels, but like they would talk to you and kiss you and shit? I mean. Really.
SO corny. Sorry, man, but it was one of the corniest stories I've ever read. You actually said eyes three times in one paragraph. Get a thesaurus.
Mwa! Corn! On a husk! |