 ghost 2010-02-05 . chapter 11 great story needs to be finished
idea you could add x antibodies , for tai and matt |
 holy#### 2009-12-03 . chapter 1 this is amazing
you have to finish this story |
 LoneWolfVampire13 2009-07-01 . chapter 11plez update, this is rele great! |
 LoneWolfVampire13 2009-06-16 . chapter 3Neo? Who's Neo? I've never heard of him. Can u explain him to me plez? |
 will reed 2009-04-15 . chapter 11 dude please updatethis stroy is awesome.i hope you have a plan for impmon that isnt lame like canon's was |
 Tai Kamiya 2008-12-02 . chapter 11 This is great but i seriously want to see it finished. |
 Tai 2008-10-04 . chapter 11 This is great, now all ya have to do is finish it |
 JapanManiac 2008-08-10 . chapter 11Please , please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please! Updated! I've waited a long time and would really love to se more! |
 digimon one 2008-05-18 . chapter 10 Dude I got to say, you managed to blend seasons 1-4 perfectly, the producers should have used your story's for thier anime. asome job dude |
 Songbird of the End 2008-05-17 . chapter 11(-after spending two hours in the "OMG squee!" feeling-)
Ok, ok, I'm better now. (-cheesy grin-) I hope this review will be coherent enough! Now then, I love the way this fic carefully merges the different seasons (AND you're leaving out Savers! Woohoo! Sorry, but the goggle-less leader just doesn't cut it for me. That's, like, a major felony in my book.) and everyone stays just about completely in character. There's just some nerdy grammar stuff you can fix, like using 'had' instead of 'have', 'their' instead of 'there', and even the occasional skipped word where your brain moves too fast for your hands and you think you typed out the word but you really didn't.
You keep referencing the Digimon movies...urk...and I only saw the first one. I really need to find the other ones on the internet...and figure out HOW MANY other ones are on the internet/have been made.
(-gasp-) Was Yamaki's wife that one lady the Myotismon made a midnight meal out of? That scene just popped in my head when you mentioned it in the last chapter's A/N.
Uh, I think that's it. 'Course, as soon as I submit this I'll remember something else...oh well. |
 4 the birds 2008-05-13 . chapter 7 OH if you're still doin' that send in stuff then I'd like to send in ...my own digimon and he's from frontier digi world,but accedentally got sent to the Human world,he's not in Flame terminal anymore!
Demi spikemon(In-Trianing)-digi-volves to: Rookmon
Attacks:bubble blow
Atribute:Virus
Type:small lizard digimon
Description-Chubby,light blue,big yellow bubble eyes,a white pig nose,black ears,dog legs flippers a white under belly and bottom tail.
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Rookmon(Rookie)-digi-volves to: Chapiomon
Attacks:acid spit/lugi
Atribute:virus
Type:Lizard digimon
Description:As big as Kouji's dog(he could pass as one)blue (no white,no ears)with a black back with a long thick black stripe on the side of all 4 legs stand up on 4's and 2's tounge is always hagin out,has a lisp, slobber,claws
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Chapiomon(Champion)-digi-volves to: Ultamatemon
Attacks:acid horn (attacks with acid horn)acid blow(shoots a big green acid ball from mouth)
Atribute:virius
Type: Acid beast digimon
Desciption:a mask like fladramon's but grey a long big horn, blu white under side musclier claws a black back and a thick tail 4 legged, horse-like ears
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Ultamatemon(ultamate)-digi-volves to:Spikedramon
Attacks:Ultamte claw,ultamate kick,ultamate punch,ultamate sword,ultamate cannon,acid daggers(shoots seven poioned daggers)
Atribute:Virus
Type:Acid beast digimon
Description:Buff, has black staps on, a thick tail three claws a grey mask a horn a cannon for a left hand,a thick tail,stands on 2's and has a huge thick sword on his black hard back
Spikedramon(Mega)-digi-volves from ultamatemon
Attacks:Dead heat/acid heat ( shoots powerful brown acid from mouth)Acid eye (shoots red acid from eyes)Acid wing (kinda like steel wing from pokemon)
Attribute:virus
Type:Lizard-dragon digimon
Description:Red eyes, metal spiked legs a spiked chest a silver spiked face mask a spiked horn,black spiked wings, a black spiked back,a black lighting stripe on his side from neck to tail.
There I'm all done now PLEASE use him it took forever to type! |
 Super garurumon 2008-03-26 . chapter 11 UPDATE NOW! |
 JapanManiac 2008-01-11 . chapter 8Nee, did Neo alredy dead? or he just doesn't show up yet?
BTW this fic is GENIUS! Updated it please!! i'm really exited to know what happened next! |
 zigmas 2008-01-02 . chapter 11Please continue! |
 zigmas 2008-01-02 . chapter 1Wow!
Impressive!
And that's just a beginning..! :) |
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