this is good... are you planning on continuing it?

Ahh this is another piece of beauty. I like this better than most dramas I've read, but it would be interesting if you used this style to make a story of your own. (goes to read more fics from your collection)
Please update.

it's sometimes sad, some funny... goods flashes of their lives, besides.

Liked this chapter too. Good job. :D

These are really interesting, nice job!

Nice chapter, I liked it. I think it was cute that Naruto got Iruka a father's day present! ^_^

This sounds really good so far! ^_^

Each section is lovely, sparse, and beautiful. I love the subtle emotions underlying each section for each character; so poignant and melancholy... just really great writing.

Keep writing please it's very good!

It's beautiful, but also kind of depressing ... but I like it, I hope you''l update soon ^^

deliciously sad and awesome...

This is sweet and it actually makes sense!!

good job keep it up

sad

SAD BUT GOOD