U made cry... how could you?! Ryou! ...:-( ill stop now

First two chapters were pretty good, but the Mary-Sue ruined it.

this is so :-0

HI MY NAME IS BEKAH AND I WANTED TO TELL U THAT I LOVED IT!...IT WAS SOI GOOD AND THO U KILLED RYOU U BROUGHT HIM BACK WHICH MADE IT ALL BETTER(BIG RYOU FAN)HE IS SO HOTT!!) I LOVED THE ENDING 2 THE LAST SENTENCE WAS REALLY GREAT...U WROTE THIS STORY REALLY WELL AND I REALLY LOVED IT..IT WAS SO GOOD WELL NOW I HAVE 2 GO SO TTYL...ps pleaz reply my e-mail address is ttyl...

I LUV THIS STORY! YOU DID A GREAT JOB! YOU CAN GO FAR IN WRITING! WHOOT! ^_^ JA NE!

YEAH! HE'S BACK! WHOOT! ^_^ NEW WEAPONS AND ATTACKS! YEAH!

NO!
HE CAN'T BE DEAD! Bad timing Ichigo even if it not your fault... NOT NANBA! ASHLEY SPOKE! YAH! I'm VERY close to crying as I type. Here it comes. *sobs*

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU MANDY-CHAN! The email didn't show up so I can't thank anymore. COOL! MORE THAN ONE ATTACK!

THANK YOU MANDY-CHAN! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU X 10!

I like the couples Ashley X Nanba and Yuki X Riley. This chappie is good too! YEAH FOR YOUR GOOD WRITING! I don't do the best in math either...

ARGH! CLIFFIE OF DOM! I like the couple Ashley X Nanba! GO ASHLEY GO!

I LIKE! Poor Ashley. But I like her character too. This is a good chapter.

Poor you. You'll be VERY busy. Good job with this chappie yet again.

Crazy love. Dang things are going to be insane.

I like Melon too. WHO IS THAT GUY?!