Quite good.

Hazel: Hey! That's not fair! That is not an appropriate ending, missie! Cliffhangers do not make good endings!! >_<
Beka: I take it there's a sequel? *looks at author's bio* Yep, that looks like one. Good.
Hazel: Well then I guess this isn't as bad as it could have been...but you must never ever do this again!
Beka: Since when did you turn into the author's mother?
Hazel: Oh, shut up. I wanna go read the other fic now!!
Beka: Whatever. Ja ne!

Hazel: Back again. I was dragged off the computer before and haven't been able to get on until now. This is an interesting chapter. Even Creeds find Yami's hair strange, ne? Lol.
Beka: Goodbye Wrartz. Back to where he belongs.
Hazel: Next chapter!

Hazel: Wow, that was lucky. I think.
Beka: I'm kind of glad we left it so late to review...that would have been such an annoying cliffhanger!
Hazel: as it is we can just keep reading. ^_~ Nice chapter!

Hazel: Oh God, I've really been neglecting lately. I'm so sorry I hadn't r&rd before!
Beka: Down with Cassaka! Bwahaha! I liked that 'DIBS ON THE HEAD!!' bit. Lol!
Hazel: This is a great chapter. One of your best ones I think. ^^

O.O
No! Is there gonna be any sequels?
*shakes fist* Better be! I'm really bad when it comes to cliffhangers(I make them practically every chapter) but doing it at the end of a chapter? :P
:( Now I'm sad that it's finished

Is this the end? Almost the end? No! I don't want it to end!

O.O
Why do I get the feeling that this fic is nearing it's end?
*Shakes fist* And damn you for all of the cliffhangers!

OOH, wow! What is gonna happen here, huh? Huh? Update so we can tell already!

Hazel: Where are there 0s all down the page? Weird, but at least the writing is more spread out.
Beka: Now it's time for the war, ne? I hate it when you leave cliffhangers
Hazel: Well update soon!!

Hazel: Aw, poor Yugi-kun. That was a really sweet conversation they had.
Beka: This war sounds interesting. You must update soon, K?

Hazel: Yay, Yami's O.K again! Out of the pink terror's spell! ^^
Beka: Imagine having coonsciences blocking your hearing. Boy would that be weird!
Hazel: This is a great chapter! Update soon!

AH! No! Not - AN IDEA!
JK - update soon K?

Hazel: Soup? What an...odd...name.
Beka: Time flies by so quickly in this story...years have passed since the first chapter? A whole new generation is on the island? Wow.
Hazel: That Tap-Tap is indeed crazy. Lol. Update soon!!

Tulip-Jin: Congrats! Your story qualifies for our C2! Nice touch with the Pharaohs are gods and Yami the Pharaoh is a real god stuff you have here...

Yami Tulip-Jin: Shameless flattery nonwithstanding, nice fic.