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AssassinedAngel
2009-07-24 . chapter 9
This story is heart wrenchingly beautiful. I adored every word of it. Disregarding a few typos and technical mistakes, this story is perfect. I love it. The plot is super original, and you have everyone in character. You make me smile and giggle at the precious Yukiru moments and make me sniffle at their sad pasts. I really hope you decide to pick this story up again, even though four years have pasted. It's truly a waste to stop here D; I love it to pieces.
AssassinedAngel
2009-07-24 . chapter 3
This is the first fanfic that has made me this giddy in a while c: Yuki is just perfectly in character. So adorable around Tohru. I'm glad they're both all blushy blushy around each other already. They're cute. There were only minor errors that I didn't even pay attention to. c;
AssassinedAngel
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
I love your style of writing. The comparisons are stunning. The only problem I saw were the misuses of "your" and "you're"
I think you captured their personalities beautifully. The story is just amazing so far!
mermaidharmony
2008-09-04 . chapter 9
update soon!
entity.unknown
2008-05-06 . chapter 9
i like your story a lot
if you can, it'd be interesting if you incoporated some action, like fighting scenes :D sorry, i get really hyped up when i read those xD update asap please!
entity.unknown
2008-05-06 . chapter 3
yay! motoko's finally here!
dunno, but stories w/ motoko in it always seem more interesting
haha, going to read the next chap.
dvne
2008-03-27 . chapter 9
elow! gosh! you really have to update soon! I finished reading your fanfic 1-9 just this afternoon and you do have an awesome job! I luv yuki
Kita Lenne
2007-08-10 . chapter 9
YOU MUST UPDATE! it's been TWO YEARS! You're killing me here! This is such a good story! This plot is so different from other stories that I have read, and believe me, i have read over a hundred. Please finish your story! T.T There have been too many good stories left unfinished... Please for the sake of all that is Yukiru, for the sake of all that is fanfiction...FINISH THE DANG STORY!
emerald kikyou
2006-10-31 . chapter 4
I love yukiru! they are my favorite couple!
it looks like yuki doesn't notice that he himself is falling for tohru too^^ how sweet!
I was so sad tht yuki didn't end up with tohru in the manga why takaya sensei why?!T_T
emerald kikyou
2006-10-31 . chapter 3
I love flash back stories they always give
more insight to the story ^^
and who wouldn\t love chibi yuki! he is so kawaii!
emerald kikyou
2006-10-31 . chapter 2
this chapter was even better than the first one!
I just love it!^^
yuki and hatori are so in character^^
the first eye contact between yuki and tohru
was my favorite part in this chapter! the way tohru seem to read the emotion behind his eyes from the first time and how yuki cought the name on her ribbon and then simled politly! great the first meeting between the tow couldn't be any better than how you wrote it^^
emerald kikyou
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
great work! I have just read the first chapter
and I am so exsaited to read more^^
this is your second fics and it's so good!
I wish you luck!
Darkened Ruby
2006-08-19 . chapter 9
YOU MUST UPDATE! IT'S BEEN FOREVER -points to top of teh page where it said it was last updated- I really enjoy this story so far ^^ so pwease update -puppy eyes-

*Story goes on faves*
Arilaen
2006-08-10 . chapter 9
OMG This is one of my FAVES! Go Yuki! I think the amount of fluff and everything is just right! Please update soon! We're waiting! XD
missmanga90
2006-07-29 . chapter 9
I love this story its verry nice ^ ^*
ut the one thing i can niot comprhead
is why do you call Akito a woman he is
a man. Well at lest thats what the mangea
say's so far ^ ^*
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