love love loved it! the story of alexander the great and his lover is cute. but it's patroclus not Patroklus. good job!

I always like when authors include real history in their works, but it always annoys me when the puppies jump into bed together the moment after they confess their feelings.

this is a really unique idea, and funny!

Aw. Cute. :D

Weren't Achilles and Patroklus lovers as well? This was really good!

Ooh!! *giggle* Bagoas...^^
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heh. funny.

although the movie was so historically inaccurate that me and a few other history geek pals were all laughing hystericaly when we watched it...heh. funny movie.

i LOVED the bagoas line to james. heh.

That was quite cute!

lol! Very nicely done :)

I'm glad you mentioned Bagoas!! Not everyone has heard of him either. If you're really interesting, I'd recommend reading The Persian Boy by Mary Renault-- it's all about Alexander and his empire, from the view of Bagoas. Who, even though he is a eunuch, he isn't as "disabled" as some of the others. In other words, he can still feel pleasure and whatnot, so he does become a lover of Alexander. It's really good, and everyone who loves slash/yaoi should read it. I cried at the end too. ^_^;

This was a great story. It was really cute and well written. Loved it!

^^ great

The last two lines... absolutely perfect.

Very nice... good use of history and fluffy at the end... Although the James/ Bagoas coment made me laugh! Nice work!

hehe! that was so cute!

Fun and cute and you've made me want to se the movie. Wonderful.