why is ash and misty married and i like the story

Kay, trying to top my last review which was... very sucky xP Anyways...

Wow, just wow, your writing is awesome and not only that, I remember reading this years ago and thinking: this isn't like any other AS story. Which is true, because it isn't. You don't have the common, cliche AS fanfic of Ash and May realizing his or her own feelings and then falling on love with the other person's body and not feelings. Yours had more of a story behind it. Not too mention that it was sad but ended in a very hopeful way that had me going, "wow, what a great fanfic".

I love the fact that May was a strange ghost and pulled Ash away from his inability to be out in the sun and even though she was OC she still felt incredibly in character.

Again, your writing is superb and I love that you gave Ash such a problem with his skin, making this, as I mentioned before, not your typical AS story. Four chapters usually seems short for a story, but it was more than enough for yours. Honestly, this fanfic is so good that I find myself re-reading it from time to time.

Thanks for writing such an awesome story and I hope this topped my previous review (lol) D

Great story, it got to me a little. But it was kinda f'ed up how Ash died. Maybe he was just claustrophobic...

This is one of the best Fanfics that I have ever read. I can't even describe how I felt when reading it. Your style of writing is really good; it comes across as being very formal, and works perfectly for this plot. The way you were able to include Ash, Misty, May, and Brock, make them recognizeable and yet your own characters at the same time was phenomenal.

Keep up the excellent work; I'll be watching for your next submissions.

Uh dude{or whatevr } this is like a Fantasy horror . jeez i hate fantasy and horror. Oh and i wouldnt say this is kinda Advanceshipp

Wow cool Ash*S Uncle dies..THEN HE WAS THINKING A BOUT SOMEIN WHEN A METORITE CAME FROM OUTER SPACE ASH WENT TO FING OUT WANT IT IS AND THEN A "SYMBOITE " { FROM SPIDER MAN 3 } JUMPS ON HIM AND THEN BECOMES " THE BLACK SPIDER -MAN { BUT HE IS GOOD } "

it's so lovely and dear

wonderful story!

it was heart touching!

*tear*

ohh misty was so evil!

haha

it's confusing how you

sometimes change

'Ash' to 'Satoshi'

non the less...

i love your writing style!

love the story too! :]

beautiful. ten stars.

Awsm story, I mean it.

Its the best Advanceshipping story I've read without a sequal.

Plz put the epilouge up!

But I almost cried at the end, and really good stories can only push me that far.

I give you a 10 out of 10!

wow the story reminds me of my gothic lit. class that i accidentally took :p freaky.

aww man! .

okay...i'm confounded...what just happened

nice fic, i know someone like him, but he don't have a happy end... i think... Be careful with all, even your mind

took ya long enough to update