Keep up the father/daughter fights...they work so well. See ya next update.

Great beginning. A cliff hanger. Well, it wouldn't be your work if it didn't have a cliff hanger.

I like it. Just a few things... (sorry!)

A. DW probably wouldn't let Gos join the team just like that. Maybe this should be just one time when she comes?

B. Rescuing a kitten seems a little cliched and OOC for Gos. Maybe...a dog? Dunno... Seeya! _