This is a really great story but if you do another one, please brush up on your spelling. it makes it difficult to enjoy such a great storyline

Dick's last name is spelled Grayson great characters with Tam and Tom.

The only thing it does for you is make you look silly.

Hahah! Oh Tamara is great. Her insults amuse me. And the fact that Dick is being a total loser makes it better.

For the sequel: This story is pretty light and campy-Batman is a dark story of separation between man and beast. Almost every superhero/villain was made because of some awful disaster has happened, they're almost always rich or incredibly poverty stricken, and if they're rich it's out of boredom sometimes, but out of necessity for the poor.

Whoa. If you didn't understand that, just scream, read it again, and you will.

Ah, okay, Catwoman wasn't much of superhero more than a double agent and she wasn't really in love with Bruce Wayne, but Batman. Believe me, I'm nineteen and I've seen every Batman Animated series known to man and I have a lot of comics-all the darker ones. I also have seen all the movies, but Michael Keaton is the only Batman in my mind.

Okay, sorry, I rambled. If you need inspiration/help don't hesitate to e-mail me. I see a lot in your work and a lot more that can be brought out by further knowledge and growing. An artist can always improve, even myself.

Great work! Don't sweat it! I'm your fan, for real!

Leave it to Dick to lose her! I was never a big fan of his anyway, but it was enjoyable to see him squirm. So...Selina's dead. Man. I thought she'd never die. I love Selina Kyle. Catwoman rawks. Woot, I'm into this story!

It is Dick Grayson and he is Nightwing. Since I see a lot of rising talent in you (meaning you're good, but you have so much more potential that you're not using), I'm going to be scrutinizing this time-you spelled fixed wrong, you put ficked. It's minor and I really hate correcting people like that, but it'd look better, you know?

Secondly, I would think Bruce would have a little turmoil in his little girl getting a boy. He'd probably check the guy out completely before allowing her to keep the date going.

Not a bad Batman fic. Like I said, it's great! I hope that what I said doesn't discourage you, it's in the best of kindness. I really want you to know that I really like your work.

Hey, I'm really enjoying this! I was almost like 'oh no, another one of Batman's girl spawns', but it is totally neat-well written, too! And I was trying to hear Bruce Wayne say 'Uh I, uh, ran into a...filing cabinet?'

That just cracked me up, but it's a good excuse-apparently Tamara doesn't think so. Next time I come in from a night of work with a black eye I'll have to tell my mom that ;).

And thanks for the review, if you like Batman, maybe you wouldn't mind reading my OC fic Nightshade.

Thank you and keep writing!

nice, i really like this story. i hope you do a sequel, and i'm afraid i don't know enough about batman to give ya ideas, sorry.

I'm interested in seeing where you take this. So far, I'm really enjoying the flow of your dialogue. Keep it up. Oh, and yes, he's Nightwing. The spelling of the last name is Grayson.

I'm afraid I don't know enough to answer that question, but I like how Tam is figuring things out. this is good.

I hope you put the next chapt soon, I really want to read more :)

Nice, good development, You got me hooked.

sounds good so far, keep it up.