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Reviews for: The Kiss
underwrldqueen 7/7/05 . chapter 1
they betrayed ani! WAH!u sould warn people that are fans of Ani and Ami! i mean, its a great story, but i dont like it because it isnt ani and padme(ami)! ...

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GR. GOOD JOB THO, IF IT WAS AN ANI/AMI STORY!

i have nothing against u.

dont track me down!
elle-ripley 5/11/03 . chapter 1
You really have a flair for writing! Thoroughly enjoyed this short story.
SuziWan 12/11/02 . chapter 1
ok so you wrote this story like 4 years ago, but I love it! I wish you would continue it!
obi's girl 7/6/01 . chapter 1
The detail. I remember you were very heavy on detail and this fic, the first passionate kiss between Amidala and Obi-Wan was beautiful:)
Padm 1/20/01 . chapter 1
WOW!Great great great !I love obi/ami stories!sequal!Good Job! :-)
obi's girl 12/28/00 . chapter 1
"I don’t care." The words came out thick with emotion unlike any she had heard in his voice. Before she could turn to face him, he had spun her about, drowning her in a passionate kiss. - I swear what I would have given to be Queen Amidala and feel Obi-Wan like that. That's why I love fan fictions, espicially when he's the main attraction :)
Theed 12/26/00 . chapter 1
STILL SO GOOD AND SATISFYING!
EnderWiggin 10/15/00 . chapter 1
Awsome story You are a good writer.
Obi 7/25/00 . chapter 1
That was great! Real emotion playing there. Meesa like!
Candy 5/21/00 . chapter 1
ah! oh my goodness... u make me look so bad! *hids face in shame* This was good.

im reading more of ur stuff... oh im also a writer here... would u mind so much as to check it out and leave reviews?
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