just beatifull... you story is just beatifull vero.
One of the best I even read ^^. its so touching and so very true at the same time. The emotions of Trunks and Mirai Bulma... you made them seem so... real and near.It's so a really beatifull story

Very sweet & touching.
-Jyaeh

It was good! PLease add more k?

Aww...so sad yet beautiful. Good job, man. :D

AW!!
Well you've done it now, you've made me cry. lol dont worry though its not hard to do that.
aw that was so SWEET! im so glad you watched that vid if it made you write this, this is one of the BEST things you've ever written it's just so beautiful and tearjerking ^_^
aw

Aww! Thank you SO much for writing about my favorite character! This story was great!