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| tanyeera 2005-04-04 ch 8, anon. | abusePretty nice.Pls hurry up with the next chapter. |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-03-20 ch 8,  | abuseok, now they are all ** me off!..besides Star and BB of corse... but still! and do you know who i hate the most? hm? do yah? the guard! what an **! i think thats the angeriest i've ever been in a review... col. i still luv! update soon! |
| LivvyRamone 2005-03-19 ch 8, | abusegood job yet again, you rock the house AND out loud, that is how hard you rock. UPDATE SOON! |
| Ravenfairie 2005-03-01 ch 7, | abuseOh that was good and i wish it was longer dont let it come to an end ~Ravenfairie |
| LivvyRamone 2005-02-28 ch 7, | abuseHOly ** (sry) that was an amazing please UPDATE SOON i love ur stories they are all great especially this one i loved (sorry to say) the part where beastboy gets sent to jail for "rape" i thought that was very inventive, and creative something i never would have thought up! Good job UPDATE SOON! |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-02-27 ch 7, | abusewoah, that was realistic. ca you do 2 more chapters, atleast? please update soon! |
| bestfan22 2005-02-18 ch 6, anon. | abusethis is awesome. i like the story plot and everything. I hope the new chapter comes soon!! |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-02-17 ch 6, | abusevery good...and sad. i dont say a story is sad alot, but that was...AND I LOVE IT! you have to continue! update soon!XD |
| Ravenfairie 2005-02-16 ch 5, | abuseGood story plezz write more soon or i might just come and get u... jk Raven fairie |
| ravenfairie 2005-02-16 ch 6, anon. | abusethat was the best story ive read so far plezz write more soon or ill die i hope raven comes back and terra goes away for ever! Ravenfairie |
| ravenfairie 2005-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a good story i loved it plez write bore soon and im sad that raven died. |
| RtDK 2005-02-15 ch 5, | abuseHmm... *Rubs his chin* Not bad...not bad... Personally, I'd work on the writing style a little bit. There's nothing truly wrong with it if you like first-person perspective, but I'd go with third-person. I have a story that you can look at if you wish for an example, but other than that, it doesn't seem like such a bad story. ~Raze, the Dragonic Knight |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-01-31 ch 5, | abuseyeah, she kinda did seem like a sorta **. but I think that by now Terra would have changed. keep the updates commin! XD |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-01-20 ch 4, | abuseyou finally updated! oh yeah one thing. how could Terra not notice Raven's absents?!? thats all. update again soon! |
| 0aloy0bung0 2005-01-12 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon! ive been waiting 4 ever... PLEASE!?! 1-12-05 |