*claps wildly*

This was AWESOME! I loved ur little OoC on Vegeta, too, cause I can't possibly imagine him giving in on the "I-want-to-be-stronger-than-everyone-plus-more" gig. But all in all this story was great! Way to go!

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~~*Chela

Hey, this is cool! It reminds me of History of Trunks only different...lol. Well it has the same basic principles.

I really like this, and sorry I didn't finish reviewing yesterday, but I kinda fell asleep with the laptop running. Wasn't my dad a happy camper when he caught me practically suffocating the laptop...the screen had gone all crazy because of the heat and all, but it's ok now!

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~~*Myshel

Wow. Violent. Very Violent.

Makes me crack my knuckles and say foul things under my breath violent.

Can't talk now, have to read more.

~~*Chela

Great couple of chapters, and if its the end, great ending! Yay for Alex and Jake! ^_^ Loved the final fight too. Excellent job!

So Alex has worked out how to get everyone back? Can't wait to see how! Heh, it was so cute, that scene where they were holding themselves. Very cool. Can't wait for more!

Cool chapter! Heh, I loved Gohan messing around with Gotenks. And I'd love to see how the twins handled a sword fight with their parents. Update soon!

I love this! This is coming along so well, and I can't wait for the training to start! I wanna see how high the twins can go. Update soon!

Wow! A bloodbath of a prologue. I love it! I'll be back to read the rest hopefully sometime soon, but I've kinda been hard pressed in get on the net lately. But yeah, so far this is great!