That's awesome! I could think of nothing you could add to that - please keep writing!

Wow. That was really...sad. I've seen the movie and have the cd, but that poem phrased it really well. Good job.

I REALLY loved this. It was wonderful. Very romantic. Hit all the right points.

Hi, thanks for your review on my story. What do you think I could improve on? I read it over and I realized that the bold thing wasn't working. My next chapter has been typed and they are in () now. Let me know so that my next chapter can please EVERYONE! LOL

af881

WOW! Somehow your poem captures Erik's character almost better than the original opera does. It's great to find someone else who can see past Erik's
harsh mannerisms to the aching soul inside. Keep writing.

Hi,
What a wonderful writer you are!
I hope you keep writing as I feel you have a wonderful gift. Thank you for the review!

*sobs* Aw... so sad.

This was great, and how fortunate of you to lose your phantomginity to Hugh Panaro...glorious, well that is if you saw it in NY, if not congrats on seeing an amazing story unfold anyway.

How very nice. The last verse was poignant. "Will forever sleep alone". I haven't heard such imagery like that since I don't know when. Thanks for the read.

This is beautiful.
Do write more song/POTO fics!

~AF881~

Beautiful, well done!

So sad but so beautiful. You did a wonderful job with this one. Thanks for sharing.

PS I just love your pen name.