It's really really good! I like how you ended the chapter and mad it Professor Fasihi. It's for Nadia, right? Anyway, I loved it. I am gonna bug you again - write more!
Oh good chapter! I loved it! I think Becki is right about it being super good! I like her cat Diablo even though it's black. I liked the crescent part of it. Anyway, very good chapter...update soon!
Becki 2004-12-03 . chapter 1
Hey, this story is great! I know that I tell you that all the time though. ADD MORE! And get to my part in the story! ^_^ Can't wait to read anything new. And if this actually works, I got to make the first review!