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Sanna Lan
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
I love it! As a former Catholic, I couldn't stop laughing (and crying) I particularly love Hail Mary «Virgin Mother, please forgive/I know I sound a traitor/But I would like a life to live/With my “evil” demon savior» I fell in love with that part *.* Why don't you make fanfics out of this? One fic per prayer XD
Caremel Apple
2006-09-24 . chapter 1
O.o From a girl with no religion, I must say. Bravo. I love them. Very good. Please do write more. I will continue to read. And Mr. Sock agrees.
-hugs and hands you a sock puppet-
sneko-chan
2006-05-03 . chapter 1
okay, i have a real thing for poetry, so why I didn't read this before I don't know. (call me stupid) anyway, what I found neat was that your poems worked very well with the story- and they still manage to sound like prayers! you are really good at it-*note*: sadly, (or happily) that's coming from a girl with no religion, but hey, it still sounds cool, and i have done a good bit of religious reading because I like to. Anyway, keep it up, got it?
duDe
2005-08-24 . chapter 1
^%#$(&^*%#*$&$%()! My God! You ARE going to copyright that arent you? Jesus girl! How can you write that well? Be my teacher...T_T

Sry. Bout that. I'm sick and high. Well...that really was great.
Ilvinaeda
2005-07-16 . chapter 1
Some interesting stuff...I'd love to see you try some original poetry too! Especially freeverse. There's a lot more freedom in it...and you can tell stories through freeverse too. ^_^

These were pretty neat. Especially that temptation one. Keep it up!
Anna
2005-04-17 . chapter 1
"I LOVED IT! So AWESOME!"
Inu-fan012
2005-03-15 . chapter 1
These are beautiful. I cried on most of them. My favorite was Hail Mary. Please continue. Thanx.
Megan Of The Sand
2005-02-19 . chapter 1
I like the last two
thechickenlittle
2005-02-10 . chapter 1
cool!
Ruby-dream
2005-02-07 . chapter 1
This is a great poem, but I wonder if it's okay to change the holy prayer to this? >-
Spoonerific
2005-02-06 . chapter 1
-reads 'Temptation' over and over'-

Ohshiny. Most excellent prayers (I really have no clue what makes a good prayer, I be atheist yo), but these sound really, really cool.

And I want a full-out fanfic to that Temptation. Because I am sinful and want smut.
ayumwu
2004-12-24 . chapter 1
this is so good! i'm not a naughty gurl, but i love the temptation one!
kuronos kitty
2004-12-08 . chapter 1
kawaii!
im a christian-i think
it been,waht?10 yars since ive gone to church
so the prayers sre like poems, cool
love tis
crazyroninchic
2004-12-03 . chapter 1
These are really cool! I like the last one alot! I can't write poetry to save my life, but you are REALLY good!
Girl With The Cauldron Spirit
2004-12-02 . chapter 1
At first, I was like "meh...", but when I actually read it, I was like "WOW!". Those prayer adaptions are pretty damn good. I especially like 'Temptation'...I love ChrnoxRosette innuendo! Write more!
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