Fairly good, the ending left a little to be desired.

That was cool.

Wow, great story. That was so interesting to read - are you a writer for a living? It was really well written, and had me gripped all the way through. So good! _

it ended way too soon. you had a good story and then it ended right in the middle.

This is good..

That was really well written. Not sloppy, and it was well thought-out. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Although the ending was rather abrupt, I like that it was somewhat unresolved. It just reminds us that pre-TPM fics are all really just small chapters in a much bigger story. WTG Kristen.