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| JavaJunkieLL4Ever 2007-04-01 ch 10,  | abuseYou never finished...i was really getting into it too. |
| Gyllenhaalicgurl05 2006-09-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseI love this story so much. I hope one day you'll write more for it. |
| Lightning Lindy 2005-06-29 ch 10, | abuseI hate how we have this middle part missing!! IT's driving me crazy,Torzi!! Um... Night of the Birthday: Jay walked in on Amie and Tom? The accident: Jay got hit by a car after seeing Amie and Tom. |
| JerseySaint19 2005-06-28 ch 10, | abusehm...what happened on the night of the birthday? I have no clue but I bet whatever you come up with will be great!! Great chapter by the way!! -JS19 |
| ProFfeSseR 2005-06-28 ch 10, | abuseYep, that's my addiction. I wonder if I have another one (think think think) Oh, I get one, watching TV! At least according to my parents :P I don't know if it's true but I guess it is when come to think of it. But completely not caring about my crazy addictions right? (or are they crazy) Everything in this story is starting to make sense, little by little but it is. I guess you won't give the clue away until the last chapter but that's pretty cool. (WHY DID I SAID THAT?? IT SO ISN'T, THAT WAY I HAVE TO WAIT LONGER :@) Enough with the joking. Great chapter!! And can't wait to read more!! |
| me 2005-06-28 ch 10, anon. | abusethis story skips around too much |
| LukeNlorelaifan 2005-06-28 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter!! I have like no clue what happened. Is one of them pregnant or something? Please update soon! I'm very confused! Keep up the awesome work!! |
| Beeno 2005-05-29 ch 9, | abuseHey! I really like this story! It does get a wee little bit confusing with all the going back and forth, but I can imagine it must have been quite hard to do a story like that and get it to make sense! Anyway, so far its been very interesting! Cant wait to read more! |
| lukelaiandroryndean 2005-05-28 ch 4, | abusegood!! |
| Rae Alexander 2005-05-28 ch 9, | abuseM axing! LOL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more if you don't, I'll cry! BuffyHatter* |
| Rae Alexander 2005-05-28 ch 7, | abuseI thought this was a awsome chapter. Only random chapters make the story better. LOL Buffyhatter* |
| Rae Alexander 2005-05-28 ch 6, | abuseM azing! Once agian I congradulate you on you great work. The story line flows so weel and I'm proud to say I have never read anything better! I was just woundering, who is the main person in this story? It is a little unclear to me! BuffyHater* |
| Rae Alexander 2005-05-28 ch 4, | abuseOmg This is an M Azing story. The names are fab, and the story line is perfect! Wow you should get into writing books and stuff! LOL BuffyHatter* |
| LukeNlorelaifan 2005-05-27 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter again. You do a great job switching back and forth between years. Can't wait for your next chapter! |
| JerseySaint19 2005-05-27 ch 9, | abuseThis is a great story!! I love it!! I haven't read anything like it. Sometimes I get confused with the switching of the time frames but then by the end of the chapter I understand it!! Ha ya me!! |