|Reviews for A Fine Line|
| Traveler07 4/7/13 . chapter 1
Dark and sweet and lovely.
| Motoko The Red Queen 1/8/13 . chapter 1
Nice story ;)
| Owl.pendantry 11/19/12 . chapter 1
at first i was all "that's umm... that's not right" but i kept reading and i startedd to understand gaara...
it was so sweet, i loved it... the absolute worst part though, was the ending because that was it, it had ended :(
| ArtemisMoon 11/3/12 . chapter 1
| Cloudess 7/30/12 . chapter 1
| AngeDeMinuit 6/8/12 . chapter 1
I Love It. How Perfectly The Characters Seemed To Wind Up In That Kind Of Position. Kept Me At The End Of My Sit. I'm Glad I Had The Privileged Of Reading This Story. (:
| therentyoupay 3/2/12 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, how fantastic. The character portrayal is amazing. Love the build up.
| LilithiaRW 1/23/12 . chapter 1
Love it! Beautifully written, you kept Gaara in character, and I'm glad this Sakura was talented enough to figure out it was him and that she wasnt incompetent. A sequel would be lovely.
| river 8/28/11 . chapter 1
Oooh i loved this i hope you did a sequel.
| EmpressOfEvilBunnies 8/10/11 . chapter 1
This is positively splendid. Job well done! ]
| Serendipithy 7/3/11 . chapter 1
When you disclaimed yourself from all the errors you may were prone to make, I was actually expecting a bunch of easy-to-see grammatical errors. I'm so so SO glad that the story flowed nice enough for me (considering how I skimmed some parts).
I really like the depth you put into Gaara's character. Trying to talk through his perspective isn't an easy task, but I think you pulled it off well. :)
| moor 5/22/11 . chapter 1
Great job showing Gaara's fascination & obsession - and thank you for showing Sakura's intelligence. She understood it was Gaara, she appreciated what he did for her, and she didn't panic when it came time to 'face' him. (The stalking was a bit creepy, admittedly, but Gaara's a disturbed individual.)
| Secretly Insane 5/14/11 . chapter 1
O.O wow this is so wondrous! The little typos, or glitches in jargon were not a major hindrance in this piece. I fixed them in my mind as I went. Otherwise it was very compelling. I love how you follow the inner workings of Gaara's mind. He's so "complicated" sometimes. lol
| Zenith Meriadoc 2/6/11 . chapter 1
You've done a bang-up job with this oneshot. In my eyes, you've done exactly what you've set out to do-to capture Gaara's true emotions and complexes. And it's believable-in terms of the pairing. I actually would like to see you do a slightly longer version of this-it's different from a lot of the GaaSaku ones I've read and I thoroughly enjoyed the amount of detail, especially since it's from Gaara's point of view, which a lot of people can't seem to pull off or stick to.
| PhoungSeppuku 1/22/11 . chapter 1
i wish there more stories like this out there; you hit home with this one. (: