| Reviews for A Fine Line |
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Traveler07 4/7/13 . chapter 1Dark and sweet and lovely. |
Motoko The Red Queen 1/8/13 . chapter 1Nice story ;) |
Owl.pendantry 11/19/12 . chapter 1at first i was all "that's umm... that's not right" but i kept reading and i startedd to understand gaara... it was so sweet, i loved it... the absolute worst part though, was the ending because that was it, it had ended :( |
ArtemisMoon 11/3/12 . chapter 1Loved it! |
Cloudess 7/30/12 . chapter 1 Luuuuuuurve it! |
AngeDeMinuit 6/8/12 . chapter 1I Love It. How Perfectly The Characters Seemed To Wind Up In That Kind Of Position. Kept Me At The End Of My Sit. I'm Glad I Had The Privileged Of Reading This Story. (: |
therentyoupay 3/2/12 . chapter 1Absolutely. Fricken'. GORGEOUS. Oh my gosh, how fantastic. The character portrayal is amazing. Love the build up. LOVE IT. |
LilithiaRW 1/23/12 . chapter 1Love it! Beautifully written, you kept Gaara in character, and I'm glad this Sakura was talented enough to figure out it was him and that she wasnt incompetent. A sequel would be lovely. |
river 8/28/11 . chapter 1 Oooh i loved this i hope you did a sequel. |
EmpressOfEvilBunnies 8/10/11 . chapter 1Wow. This is positively splendid. Job well done! ] Congratulations. |
Serendipithy 7/3/11 . chapter 1When you disclaimed yourself from all the errors you may were prone to make, I was actually expecting a bunch of easy-to-see grammatical errors. I'm so so SO glad that the story flowed nice enough for me (considering how I skimmed some parts). I really like the depth you put into Gaara's character. Trying to talk through his perspective isn't an easy task, but I think you pulled it off well. :) |
moor 5/22/11 . chapter 1Great job showing Gaara's fascination & obsession - and thank you for showing Sakura's intelligence. She understood it was Gaara, she appreciated what he did for her, and she didn't panic when it came time to 'face' him. (The stalking was a bit creepy, admittedly, but Gaara's a disturbed individual.) |
Secretly Insane 5/14/11 . chapter 1O.O wow this is so wondrous! The little typos, or glitches in jargon were not a major hindrance in this piece. I fixed them in my mind as I went. Otherwise it was very compelling. I love how you follow the inner workings of Gaara's mind. He's so "complicated" sometimes. lol |
Zenith Meriadoc 2/6/11 . chapter 1You've done a bang-up job with this oneshot. In my eyes, you've done exactly what you've set out to do-to capture Gaara's true emotions and complexes. And it's believable-in terms of the pairing. I actually would like to see you do a slightly longer version of this-it's different from a lot of the GaaSaku ones I've read and I thoroughly enjoyed the amount of detail, especially since it's from Gaara's point of view, which a lot of people can't seem to pull off or stick to. Bravo! |
PhoungSeppuku 1/22/11 . chapter 1i wish there more stories like this out there; you hit home with this one. (: |