Wonderful! You have managed to put the character development it would take most people thirty chapters to do in two (albeit long ones), without sacrificing the plotline. I'm impressed and delighted ^_^

Impressively long chapters and good character development. I definitely like this ^_^ *goes to read the next chapter*

Man, poor girl! First her bestfriend would be pillow friend *dies* then her acutal pillow friend leaves her when raised! So not fair. And I knew she'd pick the Red.

Ok..but why did the two Aes Sedai that found her not have at least one Warder? And I would think they would have been able to stop that fight in Illian, or maybe even prevented it. And man...I was highly disappointed. No sex...just the slightest mention of it. I think Laura has spoiled me.

Anyway, it was still pretty good. Will you be writing more? Maybe having Nilara get over herself and they can makeup?!

Wow! You get better. And better. And better. I LOVE this story! It ROCKS MY FACE OFF!

*flinches* Ouch! That's got to hurt! But why did Kim choose red Ajah? I thinka little explaining is in order! I still like it! It's just that the reasons people choose what they choose are unclear to me. But update soon please!

excellent, excellent story.

Please update! I'm definitely curious to see where this leads!

You know I love this story, especially the Caemlyn part, where you get to see just how stubborn Kim really is. Add the rest, add the rest!! :D