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Reviews for: The Pretense of Happiness
Silver Wolf Pups
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
I like this story alot. Please update soon so i can read more. And anyone who says your story suxs needs to be shot because it far from suxs. Its awsome and you are a fantastic writer keep up the good work.
kimmy14
2006-08-22 . chapter 1
i loved it you should do more
LadyOfWolves
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
I like this story! ^_^
AnimeFeline
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
This is a great story so far. i am looking forward to upcoming chapters.
ILoveInuyashaSama
2006-05-10 . chapter 1
I'm really interested in this, it's really well written, I'm adding it to my favorites so I can read when you update!
XVorpalxBladeX
2006-05-03 . chapter 1
I really like the story and sorry about your cold. I read these kinds of stories all the time. For some reason im obsessed with parental abuse or just plain phisical abuse in stories. I write some myself on paper. Good story I dont think you should die.
petpeeves12
2005-05-20 . chapter 1
you talk to much. Your story was good to my standards. This might sound evil but I want you to add more detail on Inuyasha getting beaten. Gr! Write a really long chapter in the next chapter. This one was too short. I'm really evil today. Good job on the story.
readingfreak742
2004-12-04 . chapter 1
really good fic...PLZ update!
Rowan de Angelique
2004-12-03 . chapter 1
whoa...totally awesome story...i really love it. you should definately continue it but dont EVER force yourself, i agree. if i force myself, crap ensues. lol

~Amy-san(READ MY STORYS!)
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