Oh, priceless! I love it... and really my husband came from a very bad neighborhood so 16 18 20 and 21 were all mile-stone parties that he never expected to live to reach. Many in his neighborhood felt that way so yes, you tend to make a party really worth it at those times.

The underage drinking... um for starters- they are not legally registered residents... no way they would get prosecuted for the drinking... Maybe for being undocumented...

Bwahahaha! Drunk Leo and Raph make for good entertainment, ha! "Nin'a vaish?"

Awesome story!

Ha ha, that's funny XD I spent about ten minutes trying to figure out what Nin'a va'ish was. :P

hehe. Very cute uh...morning after? Doesn't seem that the night really ended for those two. Ninja vanish! hehe.

I did spot Mikey's and I am headed over there right now. Catch you on the flip-side!

Cheers

pacphys

Hehe, Leo getting drunk with Raph. Who'da thunk it? This whole story has been hilarious. Now I'm gonna go read Mikey's.

*Quickly wipes up the water she had been drinking when she read the bit about Mikey pulling the silver thread from his mouth* ROTFL THAT IS GREAT!

Ooh Donnie's good. Making sure that Leo doesn't see Mikey.

Oh that is Terrific. I'll bet Leo was surprised. Are you gonna do the other guys too? Ir is this a one-shot. I don't think the same trick would work twice. Very funny little story. ]

Cheers,

pacphys

Neat topic! I love birthday celebrations - so long as it's not mine! LOL The numbers keep getting bigger and so do I. I like visitng Neverland now and then, too, where I don't have to grow up! :0)

Love your writing style, although you've 'misplaced' or eliminated certain punctuation marks such as comas, semi colons, etc... Run on sentences are so easy to do and, yet, so easy to avoid. I've done both, just so you know. You have a few of them here and there in the story. A little FYI. :0)

You've done a terrific job of crafting this and I can easily assume that you are either from the UK, Australia, or New Zealand - or even Canada! Some of your terms are a bit different (Champers, being one, rat assed another - which I think means getting really drunk, etc...). I love all the different terms, though, so please keep them in. :0)

BTW, who is Bud, with reference to 'Bud and April'. Is Bud a new beau for her or is the term you used 'champers' to refer to April having too much Bud ( Beer ) and getting plastered? Hm...

Anyway, not sure if you're planning on continuing this, but it stands alone quite nicely as a one shot.

Great job!

Be blessed.

This story was funny. But would Splinter let them drink at eighteen? I thought the legal age was twenty-one. Anyway, it was still good. Write another good story soon. U are a good writer.

Love it - like the way you left the rest of the evening up to the reader's imagination. Also, when "Leonardo-san" got his first surprise, there was a moment where I began to doubt how this story would turn out, you sure kept me guessing. Great story!