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| junemama 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abuseHi,its junemama this is not a review sorry but I'll make sure to write one later this story sounds good. I just wanted you to know I created a Forum that way we can talk about the Harem project. there's already a FAQ, if you need any info I will make a topic for ideas and more things for this story. just check out the Forum. Thanks for joining in my Harem Project,Junemama peace. |
| junemama 2008-03-06 ch 3, | abuseOkay this is the 3rd poem I've read so now all I have to say is wow. This poem was really good it has inspires me to write a fanfic. |
| junemama 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseoh it's dark and full of suspense and its only in 3 sentences long! It's a haiku right? that's the only type of poem that I know that's short. I'm going to read another one. |
| Razzberry808 2007-03-01 ch 2, | abuseI really liked both of your poems. Your really talented. ~Razz |
| Danais Morales 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... *_* ... U_U ... ^_^ You have one long,interesting profile. And with that, only one poem? You need to put up at least a story!-_- |
| Jessie is Loved 2005-12-16 ch 3, | abusei really like this peopm you show talent in your work and i like it. |
| Jessie is Loved 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseit isn't bad. i also write. i love to write poetry and stories. and you seem to have some talent. |
| Grufflump 2005-07-28 ch 4, | abuseWOOHOO!! that was really good...a bit sad though (wipes away tear)...i am just gonna stop typing now but i thought it was really good Bubi ^_^ |
| Grufflump 2005-07-26 ch 3, | abuse*Claps again* *rubs hand from clapping so much* ok we lthat was so good...and sad *wipes tear*, keep going with them though Kai:Yeah that was awsome *wipes away a tear* Max:YOUR ARE CRYING!?!? Kai:*glares then hits Max* Max:OW *falls to floor unconsious* Sorry about that -_-; |
| Grufflump 2005-07-26 ch 2, | abuse*claps again* That was so nice...and tru *nods* |
| Grufflump 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWOOHOO *claps*, that was really good...a bit short but really good ^_^ |
| Kurama's wannabe girlfriend 2005-06-29 ch 3, | abuseThat was.. like the best. So sweet. Who's it about? You know your sister is really really good at these. There are sad and sweet, filled with emotion... |
| Kurama's wannabe girlfriend 2005-06-29 ch 2, | abuseAw.. I really liked that one. Your sister is good at writing poems. It is really sweet.. like.. maybe Hijiri likes Tsuzuki? Maybe, no? |
| Kurama's wannabe girlfriend 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseIs this a haiku? If it is, the last line shouldn't have six syllables. You could've just said 'Knife ready to strike'.If it was just a random piece of writing, it was pretty good. Mysterious. |
| miko-of-eternal-nite 2005-05-27 ch 2, | abuseIt's pretty good. Keep up the good work girl! |