very very good. You write angst well. good job!

curse you, you made me smile! :~)

that was very beautiful. very deep, almost like actual thoughts.

Hey good work! I like the depth you've given Starfire's character here and nice bit of description at the beginning. I hope you plan on writing more!

o romantic and oh so full of angsty romantic Starfire.Ya never see that anymore...I like it prsonally and I don't really read summaries so if this is a one--shot than good job. If this is a tory then I have a couple of words to say...UPDATE NOW OR FEEL THE WRATH OF STARFIRE'S PUDDING!.Loves it;)

some of the adjectives and adverbs u use don't flow with the rest of ure story. is starfire really that weak inside? a bit ooc, but an interesting approach.

This is a really good insight to Starfire and how she feels for Robin. It's excellently written! The way she speaks is spot-on.

The only critique I can give is in the line "I hate you." I get this sense she might regret saying that out loud once she'd said it. A follow-up line of "No, that is not true. Still, I cannot stand you do to me anymore..." and on like normal. This is just my opinion, mind you.

Otherwise, I really like it. Keep it up!

oh that was so good ! please finish it!

You are not getting rusty at all. Great Job.

OMGF!you NEED to finish that!It is so adorable
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Starbeam A.K.A R/s child
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Aww that was such a lovely, poetic dive into Star's character...I especially love her end quote. “I will just continue smiling…for you…”

I've already left my opinions earlier, but I must congratulate you for such a fine story. I give this a Silver Rating on my Review Scale (from 1-5, this would be a 3).

::claps hands:: For one so rusty, you haven't lost your touch ;-). This was a great one-shot expressing how Star truly would be at times when she's alone. Congradulations Kat.

"We who are truly brave, will never live in fear." -Talon

That was undeniably beautiful. I've never seen Starfire's thoughts so clearly written. I applaud you on this amazing piece of work.
~Cat

Robin's a jerk! *whaps him* Always making Starfire so sad. >.> At least he lightens up every now and then. But not often enough! Starfire needs to... wrassle him, or something. Make him behave. XD

Seriously, this was a nice piece of work. Short or otherwise, it's full of feeling, which is all that really matters. Good work!