 Oneshadedarker 10/24/05 . chapter 1Lol. This is so cute...aww. Wow, this is all from experience? My, what an interesting life you lead, must make for great stories. Awesome job on this and thanks for the cute story. It definately made me smile. |
 treneka 12/3/04 . chapter 1This was simply darling. I like the casual affection so simply portrayed, as well as the fact that Hakkai is not as innocent as he looks. If I could make one suggestion it would only be to include a bit more description of their physical surroundings (i.e. was Hakkai chopping veggies at a table? a counter? Which pot did Gojyo get? a large one? a shallow one?). A touch of environmental description might enhance the participation of the reader, but that's just my quibble. As it stands, I enjoy it. Keep up the great work. |
 Keruri1222 12/2/04 . chapter 1Phwee...Karu-san used my name in one of her ficcies! x Uwa, hontou ni arigatou gozaimasu! You're the best, nyaa! _
Aside from the fangirling, (and I'm sorry now that I did), definitely a favorite now. It's 58 fluff, why WOULDN'T I like it? Not to mention the Gojyo POV-ness, (which I STILL say that you execute more masterfully than anyone else can), the fact that I just -see- Gojyo acting like that when doing things around the kitchen, (because the, 'making as much noise with this as possible,' line was simly brilliant), and...WHY in the name of the good people did you stop the one-shot THERE? It's probably not good that I wasitching for a brand of Karu-san, 'pr0n,' (as you put it), but... X33 The last scenes were th3 aw3s0me-n3ss. (Or something like that. Did I mention I don't excell in 'L33k Sp34k'? I'm not even sure if it's called that, even. )
Great job as usual...and thank you for calling me sweet, nyaa! _ I get that a lot, actually...although it's because I'd rather be known as a nice gal than a mean one...or something like that.
-Keruri |