Nicely done. I liked the fight scene and the ending of the chapter. Great job.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

I think it's great! In fact I give it*

Oh wow...This was beyond words brilliant and amazing. I laughed and had tears and was yelling at my computer all the way through this.
Your characters are really true to the turtles and to themselves--they are what you created them to be throughout. Furthermore, your plot and descriptions were amazing and awesome.
I was so sad by the end, but it also did fit. Wow...again. This is truly good, one of the best fanfictions I have read, period...

T.T This ending was so sad... I'm actually crying. I may have to read your other ending to feel better. :(

Oh man... This chapter just about broke my heart. My throat is still thick.

I have no idea what catotonic means...but good story.

why leo has to have amnesia! wha!! (sorry, was watching i love lucy this morn) but anywho, i'm sure you're better than amazing. but now i must go finish this work you have done, i have like...39 more chapters to go or close to it.

tee tee for then, ta ta for now.

(twirl) i'm loving this!! and because this story is completed, i don't have to wait for updates! i'm just a lil sore of the fact thta i didn't notice your work earlier! does leo really have amnesia? hold on...i can read the rest! tee tee for then, ta ta for now.

you. are. so. brillant!

whoa. whoa. the only word that can exit my lips, whoa.

This is pretty cool. This has so much emotion and detail. It's written pretty much. I did notice a small amount of errors but other than that, it was pretty much ok. I could have easly mistook this for a book.

Infiltration! Dun dun dun DUN! Am I right in guessing that that would be Raph, Don, and Mike? Only one way to find out, but I think I'll drop one of my promised reviews first.

allrighty here, be sure that I am still majorly enjoying this, and not simply squeaking by with a few chapters each night. I am anticipating a sleepless night tonight, so I'll take advantage and get some heavy reading done!

Lets see... now this is taking an interesting turn. I hadn't thought that the rest of the boys would find Leo so quickly. I was under the impression that this would mainly be centered between the two. Hey, I'm not complaining. Don't be thinking that... I LOVE them all, so it's an unexpected treat for me. Now too, I'm wondering how this will all turn out.

I wrote down a couple things somewhere in a document that I wanted to comment on in particular... Ah, here they are. My highlight of chappy three was the whole "We are the protecters of the foolhardy... " WHACK! "Idiot of the sewers." Lol, that totally made my day. I'm picturing it as we (I) speak (type). lol! Also In chappy three, Donny with the line, "I do know one thing... It's definitely blood." Lol, this sort of made me think of the old cartoons and the movies. Don sometimes got to state the obvious, (ie: "because it has Whitman's name written all over it!") and this, to me, totally keeps in the spirit of the cartoons and movies... I don't know if it was intentional, but it sure did make me grin!

Chappy four, I was really impressed with how you portrayed Raph, especially in his ability to sense emotions. The unknowing (on Beth''s part) interaction between Beth and Raph was inTENSE! I loved it!

Yes, you read right... still liking Beth! Oh, really? You wrote this for another author? And she has the same condition? That's pretty cool, major props to you! I'll have to check out the alt ending too, although I wouldn't want to be in your position of that whole business...

I love your responses! I do the same thing with mine, and besides, I like to talk! Ok... this is long enough! Off to see what will happen next!

Oh, this one's a whopper! L-O-N-G LONG! Lol, (winks) you're lucky you hooked me with this chappy and your summary... Hey and look at that: it's finished!! No waiting for updates!

OC's are (yet again, I think you've heard this from me before :D) not always well done, and therefore I tend to avoid them. But you haven't led me wrong before, so I clicked, and I'm glad I did!

Are you a fellow Alaska-dweller? Winters ARE quite long up here, although I wouldn't say the scenery is THAT repetitive... (lol, I'm messing with you!)

Also, this is a Leo story, if I read the summary correctly. Now, Leo isn't my fav turtle (but he's still a turtle, which means I love him all the same), but I gotta admit I'm eager to see how this all turns out.

As you may have noticed, I tend to leave long reviews commenting on anything and everything that comes to mind, so rather than having to remember 47 chapters worth of events, I'll leave a review every five or six chapters. More, if the chapters are shorter than this one was.

Ok... (rubs hands together) Reading... NOW!

Just a quick note to tell you that I absolutely loved this fic! I liked this ending a lot, it stays true to the characters and the story.

Now, should I go and finish re-reading 6th Potter so I could start the final one, or should I go and read the happily-ever-after ending?

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Happy end it is. :D

AAH! I absolutely LOVE how this ended! Raph is raph and mikey's mike, haha. You write amazing, so I'm gonna start checking out more of your stuff! ^_^

I loved 'Butterfly'. I definitely teared up in the end, I felt so bad for Leo. But I guess what he did just shows how much he cared for Beth, right? Well, great job on your series! I got hooked on it and couldn't stop reading and managed to finish it in two days (I was reading as slow as I could, dragging out the goodness)! Great job, SERIOUSLY. I am SO adding this to my favorite stories.