nice :) not how i expect it to end...but i guess that's a good as any place to leave it

i like it so far...though im sad that you killed off Kirika...but it's interesting to see what will happen next

..wow..the pairing was so unexpected...that i had to read and review it

"I became literally infatuated with Chloe from the very moment I laid eyes on her. Of course, Chloe was then killed. Though it was Kirika who held the . . . fork, everything would have gone simply if Mireille hadn't arrived at that moment. Therefore I believe that the brunt of the responsibility for Chloe's death lies on Mireille. That is why I hate her."

Just thought I'd quote that from Chapter Three. The reason is, I feel the same way, fell in love with Chloe, some say I get too into this stuff.

I read all the Chloe fics, but I don't read them on the internet, so I don't review. Good ol' copy and paste.

I wouldn't have minded if it got a bit lemony... ] I just want more M/C (inter)action.

Good, but too short. And I wanted the shoujo-ai, *sadface* nevertheless it was a nice read. Though I'm an avid Mireille hater and would never want Chloe to end up with her. But that's me. Keep it up!

Huh... ended a bit different than I was hoping. And uh, there wasn't really any.. shoujo-ai at all. (crap.)

I think you've ended it too abrubtly there. Maybe more of a conversation between the two would have worked. But either than that, nice work! -cough-Epilogue!-cough- Good luck on future stories.

Whoa! Finally! An update! This really made my day. Too bad your chapters are really kinda short... But I'm still glad a new chapter came out.

Well, so far, the story's great. And I've been having a lot of ideas of what could happen next. Maybe I'll add it to the doujinshi (which I haven't really started.. only finished the cover page..) D

Can't wait for the next chapter.

XD i absolutely LOVE it. and i don't know why..but i like how Mireille asked "..saplings?" it made me imagine her with a confused look on her face. _

other than that...it was just plain. AWESOME.

please update soon!

Poor Chloe...

(She's so cute when she's half-asleep, though.)

Wow, thats nice, actually. That's not something you see everyday and I feared the worst *g*

Poor Kirika, though XD

Actually I'd been thinking about a MireilleXChloe story too (especially after watching Madlax XD)but it turned out as too hard for me to write

But you're doing it pretty well so far. Can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting, and has potential, even if I think Mireille would rage and berserk a lot more at Kirika's death.

I actually reviewed merely to pull up a point that might seem silly, but that always somehow causes a twist in my stomach whenever I encounter it. Why would you say you hated [x] character, particularly that you hated them avidly? Disliked their personality, perchance, but why something so strong as hatred? I remember a discussion I once ventured into on a forum that asked for "characters that make you feel sick", and one poster gave a badly-typoed, but somehow eloquent response: "Poor characters... all they wanted to do was make you smile."

Has Mireille, or any other character, done anything to deserve your hatred?

Eh, I'm rambling... I have feelngs for characters, I guess. :3

great idea can't wait to read more

Wao... I need to say Wao... it is really great, even if I gaped mouth opened at the screen for some minutes as I saw ur summary, hahaha. It is not ooc, as I have been afraid of. Continue, it is really interesting, even if I need to mourn for my dead Kirika _;;.

*stares in disbelief* aww no! Kirika died! (i didn't really click with her but eh, i'm still sad)

crap, now i have to watch episode 25.

i'm really anxious for the next chapter to come out. so please! update soon!