nice :) not how i expect it to end...but i guess that's a good as any place to leave it

i like it so far...though im sad that you killed off Kirika...but it's interesting to see what will happen next

..wow..the pairing was so unexpected...that i had to read and review it

"I became literally infatuated with Chloe from the very moment I laid eyes on her. Of course, Chloe was then killed. Though it was Kirika who held the . . . fork, everything would have gone simply if Mireille hadn't arrived at that moment. Therefore I believe that the brunt of the responsibility for Chloe's death lies on Mireille. That is why I hate her."
Just thought I'd quote that from Chapter Three. The reason is, I feel the same way, fell in love with Chloe, some say I get too into this stuff.
I read all the Chloe fics, but I don't read them on the internet, so I don't review. Good ol' copy and paste.

I wouldn't have minded if it got a bit lemony... =] I just want more M/C (inter)action.

Good, but too short. And I wanted the shoujo-ai, *sadface* nevertheless it was a nice read. Though I'm an avid Mireille hater and would never want Chloe to end up with her. But that's me. Keep it up!

Huh... ended a bit different than I was hoping. And uh, there wasn't really any.. shoujo-ai at all. (crap.)

I think you've ended it too abrubtly there. Maybe more of a conversation between the two would have worked. But either than that, nice work! -cough-Epilogue!-cough- Good luck on future stories.

Whoa! Finally! An update!! This really made my day. Too bad your chapters are really kinda short... But I'm still glad a new chapter came out.

Well, so far, the story's great. And I've been having a lot of ideas of what could happen next. Maybe I'll add it to the doujinshi (which I haven't really started.. only finished the cover page..) =D

Can't wait for the next chapter.

XD i absolutely LOVE it. and i don't know why..but i like how Mireille asked "..saplings?" it made me imagine her with a confused look on her face. ^__^

other than that...it was just plain. AWESOME.

please update soon!!

Poor Chloe...

(She's so cute when she's half-asleep, though.)

Wow, thats nice, actually. That's not something you see everyday and I feared the worst *g*
Poor Kirika, though XD
Actually I'd been thinking about a MireilleXChloe story too (especially after watching Madlax XD)but it turned out as too hard for me to write^^
But you're doing it pretty well so far. Can't wait for the next chapter^^

Interesting, and has potential, even if I think Mireille would rage and berserk a lot more at Kirika's death.

I actually reviewed merely to pull up a point that might seem silly, but that always somehow causes a twist in my stomach whenever I encounter it. Why would you say you hated [x] character, particularly that you hated them avidly? Disliked their personality, perchance, but why something so strong as hatred? I remember a discussion I once ventured into on a forum that asked for "characters that make you feel sick", and one poster gave a badly-typoed, but somehow eloquent response: "Poor characters... all they wanted to do was make you smile."

Has Mireille, or any other character, done anything to deserve your hatred?

Eh, I'm rambling... I have feelngs for characters, I guess. :3

great idea can't wait to read more

Wao... I need to say Wao... it is really great, even if I gaped mouth opened at the screen for some minutes as I saw ur summary, hahaha. It is not ooc, as I have been afraid of. Continue, it is really interesting, even if I need to mourn for my dead Kirika ^_^;;.

*stares in disbelief* aww no!! Kirika died! (i didn't really click with her but eh, i'm still sad)

crap, now i have to watch episode 25.

i'm really anxious for the next chapter to come out. so please! update soon!