I think this story is great, I don't know why your not getting any reviews, I hope you continue your story.

Augh! The INRONY! I was reading my smart-a$$ comments from the first review I ever gave you. Oooohhhhhhhh... falls off her chair from the gratuitous amount of irony

pretty good story katelynN,

yes katelynN, only pretty good,cause u wanna know y?

well i'll tell u in the nicest way i know how...

In the first couple of chapters(1-5) of ur story ur characters lacked some emotions. And the ones you portrayed could have been expanded on some more and that's it...well for now...

Awesome story line so far! Keep up the good work and the fic writing...and don't forget Peter!

Christiana

Hmmm... That's nice, I'm laughing, that's prob-bob-ly the best chapter yet. Go Queen Vegeta (ps:her bio rocks, all you people out there- READ THE BIO)

Exactly.

Yeah.

The End

That was sad, but good. I'm guessing that tousan means father, I don't know sometimes these words confuse me. well, good story.

He he he giggle fit... **** OK, that was kinda cool, kinda funky kinda *spasms back in2 giggle again* hehehehehe, sorry, it's not just your fanfic, I'm having an ultimate sugar high evening. Nice Job 5 stars. (PS: If you can plug your stuff on mine I'm doing it too- I'm writing a screwed up fanfic, it's called the sad sad tale of old lorg (more giggles) It's wacked. (More giggles) Too much sugar... rotflol good, anyway, it was good.

The Master of Duckness creeps into the room, looking over her shoulder every few seconds

Duck-K: I hope you sppreciate what I am doing for you QV. I've never before venture this far into the anime section since I took up res. in the book sec. 4 months ago, and I am here JUST to read your stuf and critique. Anyway, it was very teary, but that makes sense, I can't tell you if it was OOC or not b/c you know how I feel about lè show, but you have a strong, confident writing style whenever you write about DBZ. It's nice, and your bio is insanely funny.

Duck-K creeps out again only to be mugged 3 seconds later by a bunch of Gundam fans demanding all her spare change (no offense to gundam fan, especially if you read Everworld fanfics)

From, the Lord of all things Duck, and her Blue, sunglass-wearing, martini-drinking, duck muse Moe.

PLEEEEASE keep writing. . . I reallyreallyreally like it, and I'm a picky person. Especially since I write fanfics. And the hardest people to write for are authors. . . .

Good..keep up the good work!

I liked the part with the androids fighting over how boring trying on clothes were )

Very good. You're getting better. I can't wait for the next part. (10)

Oooh...write more! This is awesome )

::sniff:: this is so sad, and you have captured the emotions so well. Poor Gohan, he just keeps getting dropped and tossed around, even thogh he is dead. The humor is dark, but very funny. Great job. Write more soon.

Gosh, this is so well written! I can totally see Trunks yelling and banging his fists in the ground when Gohan dies. The emotions are real in this fic, and I like that! Please continue QV, this is really good so far! Kureeji

*tries her best to hold back a laugh* *starts laughing out loud* I'm sorry! I'm sorry! But the part when he tried to sling Gohan's body on his shoulder was FUNNY! *looks around at all the gohan fans, who were looking very displeased* *muttering* It was to me at least...;)