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monstahhchan 2008-07-28 ch 14,	abuseI realize I've already reviewed this, but I just cant control myself. I love you, and you/Seto explained things I don't understand in the bussiness world, and i agree with you, though I've never really talked about that kind of stuff in school before, I'm sure i will, and thanks to you, I can actually join in on the arguement instead of being a total clueless blaghh in the back of the room. Thank you. And you better get that job soon, I want that new SxS fic. :D
monstahhchan 2008-07-28 ch 1,	abuseI love this story. It's so sweet and adorable, and un-cliche.
Kako 2008-06-27 ch 14,	abuseIncredible. This fanfic is so fantastic, I love how different an approach you've taken and still how true to character everyone is, and its so funny too. The added economic and business information only serves to make it that much more original, I've never read an SxS fic that had that type of conversation in it (and I love how the only conversation in the entire fic is between the two of them). One more thing. Congratulations on 800 reviews! ~Kako
P.O.J.A 2008-06-22 ch 14,	abuseno words could fathom the amount of gratitude I have towards you for writing such a piece; it was incredible, more than I bargained for and I couldn’t help but keep reading once I started (granted that I started at 10.00 pm, it’s 1.27 am Sunday morning now and I have a final exam to sit 9.00 am Monday that I barely studied for lol). Your writing style is superb, sheer brilliance at how you mastered the art of first person so wonderfully as well as your use of literary devices and jargon placed your story above the average “fanfic”. The fact that the story as fluffy as it was at times wasn’t sappy and overly dramatic, something I wouldn’t expect to see revolving around kaiba (as the most action he’s ever gotten was courtesy yugi and his buddies) was something I greatly respected and cherished. I esp love that you stayed so true to the characters it was AMAZING! Not once did I not believe a word kaiba or serenity uttered because it felt so real to them, and I truly appreciated your “rules”. The cliché factor as most (including myself) have fallen prey to at times was found not once here, and you’ve inspired me to make my own set of rules for the S&S fic I had been planning over a year myself hehe! Great material, just the right amount of fluff, angst, confusion and comedy to make this fic as grand as it is, LOVED EVERY MINUTE! I implore you continue to do what you do best, and I must say after reading this not only are you a strong business (or social science woman) but clearly a wicked S&S authoress as well. Keep it up, hope to hear much more from you in the future ;)
The Anonymous Authoress 2008-06-05 ch 14,	abuseI just read your story. In one sitting-- for the FOURTH time ... and I'm not the type to re-read fanfiction. All I can say: Bravo. Really, really spectacular work.
WuLongPao 2008-05-23 ch 1,	abuseYour story is like a breath of fresh air from all the fics out there. The pace is slow but that makes the story so much more endearing. I really enjoyed the relaxed pace. It's sweet
00asianwriter00 2008-05-08 ch 14,	abuseI knew that this story was good from the very time I set my eyes on it and I have loved it from the beginning to the end with it's straight-forward romance (unlike my own fanfics). ^^ I dare say that I enjoy this fanfic and I am still a little miffed at how short it is, but this is one of the few great fanfics that I find out there. On a reccommendation, have you ever read Bit of a Change by esama? It's a really good Yu-Gi-Oh! and Harry Potter crossover; try reading it sometime, you might like it (although you might have not read Harry Potter before, but you don't need to know too much about Harry Potter to understand and like it).
fanofthisfiction 2008-04-03 ch 14, anon.	abuseWow...I really enjoyed this fiction piece. I seriously enjoyed looking into the mind of Seto Kaiba. Who else would spend days (and pages) talking about the importance his peaceful reading time at the coffee place and only a sentence when he finally spends a night at Coffee girl's house? You really captured the characters well. How the smartest, handsome, young CEO could know so many complex and wonderful things but fail miserably at placing a face and even finding out her name (the love of his life's name) was simply H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S! Of course some of the smartest people can lack some common sense which can make even that fact so much more funny! Kudos to you on a job very well done. This different take to pairing of Yu-Gi-Oh characters was definitely a new wonderful twist. I hope you will consider this inside mind view for other character pairs.
Time is Endless 2008-03-25 ch 14,	abuseWow. What do you say when you finish reading a fanfic that's so good you feel like you can't stand afterwards? Thanks for another wonderful, amazing, beautifully written story. (And I hope you find the job you're looking for!)
BlackRoseFire 2008-03-11 ch 14,	abusePlease explain how you can say this-_- "Ahem. Congratulations, readers, you have just completed my most boring, unromantic, unemotional fic ever." How can you call that not romantic? I loved this fic. I can't wait till you write another one. I love the feel of your fic. The way you let the story flow from week to week. 5/5
The Sleeping Creature 2008-03-04 ch 14,	abuseThis is the first story I've read for this pairing, and I quite enjoyed it. It was really interesting to read your opinions on interest rates and the like-- I think I'll read more on the subject, now. It was very refreshing to see a realistic and interesting, empty-of-cliche fanfiction-- and a romance, no less. Hurray.
Shinki 2007-11-20 ch 14,	abuseI love your style of writing. It was beautiful. Everything was perfectly intricate yet not to much. I love how only two characters actually talked. Also its very Kaiba to fall in love with someone without knowing their name.
BountyHuntress16 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuseI've read this a few times and then i always have to dig for it again. So I will put it in my faves because I know I'll want it again. I love the concept behind this story. It adds a depth to it by focusing in and really drawing from outside experiences and sources. Very nice. and of course, the last funny bit is priceless
Lady Kendra 2007-11-02 ch 14,	abuseNice story...although slightly unrealistic for someone to go that long without knowing someone's name, phone nummber, or even seeing them other days of the week.
Lady Kendra 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseI love the way you started this chapter out. Great work.

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