I love the update. good job! Please update soon!

Wow. I just love your writing. I love your ideas! This is just great. You've really got me wondering... how did Pony and Soda grow so far apart? Why is Ponyboy still seemingly living in the past? How did Soda end up getting out and Ponyboy didn't? There is so much going on in the background of this story... You are doing such a great job! (But don't forget about Johnny Cade's designer Defense- I need to know how that ends).

Scarlett

that was good!

I LOVE IT! LOVE! Really good! I mean it.

Look what i stummbled over, another great story by a great author! i like it! its a great story and is deffintly going somewhere... keep going, im curious...

Loved the chapter! I wonder if Soda's going be okay with Kevin reading through Ponyboy's composition. I wonder if Pony will even care. I still like that Kevin found it. He can learn so much about his family's past now and get an idea of what life was really like for them. Keep up the great work!

I enjoyed this chapter very much. I know just how it goes when you have to entertain people you aren't sure about and thought Kevin was amusing. He's a great character and great job!

See ya in the funny papers! Tens

Wow... this could get REALLY interesting. It was really good before, but this is really quite an ingenious idea. You have so many ways to go with this now. I am very interested to see how this story will affect Soda's son.

Scarlett

Hey im glad you used my idea! Well it might not have been mine you might have thought it up but either way hes reading Ponyboys theme:D I cant wait to see what his reactions are... i hope you tell us which parts stood out the most to Kevin when he was reading it and stuff liek that, Update Soon

as soon as he picked up the composition book I knew what he'd find. love to see more, great story, I like the sparse writing style. too bad that Two-bit's in jail though

Interesting chapter...I like how he stumbled across Ponyboy's English composition. I wonder how he's going to feel as he reads it.

You've created a great atmosphere in the plot. I can almost feel the uneasiness and tension that's been going on. It's so strange that Soda left his past in the past. I would've never imagined it that way.

Great job, as usual. You always impress me.

that was good!

Im liking this plot, extremly... original. You should have Kevin come across Ponyboy's theme (or in other words, the Outsiders) or have Sodapop tell him to read it so Kevin could see what it was like when they were just teenagers with the whole greaser soc thing. Kevin definitely needs a... dose of reality, i guess that puts it right. Update soon.

good chapter!

Geez, Kevin is kinda dumb. Who can't tell the difference between a greaser and a hippie?