What can I say? This has been one of the best fanfictions I have read! Please continue with this story! I'm so curious about Lawrence and why his aura of Silver mana was so strong. Can't wait for the second book!

All I have to say is BRAVO!

OMG! I thought Fina died too lol! Great job! You have my props!

YAY! I liked this chapter too! I think that you might be making Lawrence a silvite too and that's awsome. I can't wait to read more.

Heck yea! that was an awesome moment between Guilder and Clara *sings out* LOVE IT!

WOOHOO! Nice... they finally got the words out! love this chapter and I can't wait to read Guilder and Clara's moments lol!

OMG! I loved this chapter! It was a good one! I really thought Vyse died! lol. Can't wait to read more... great job with the story so far! I love it!

She dies! no! That's sad *cries*. Well it's good that Vyse wants revenge on those cold blooded jerks!

OMG! Nice Vyse and Fina part! Love it! Keep up the good work!

Awesome story, i loved it. Can't wait for the sequal. Also, the story of Lawrence's past seems like it'll be very interesting... Hope to hear from you again soon in the world of SoA, take it easy.

W00T, GREAT JOB ON CHAPTER 1!

i hate aika as a person, but i love her super moves in the game!

so yay for killing her off!

but great job, i can clearly picture whats happenning and everything

*salutes at the author, Holyknightsteve*

Good story all around, with a good pacing. At first I didn't think killing a character before the story even starts was a good idea, but in the end Aika still had a major role despite being dead...

I think you did a good job on Gilder/Clara by developing their relationship with both serious and funny elements without making Clara too annoying. The romance part for both couples was well done but I wish you would have given Fina a little more depht. You should have added a few elements in order to develop her personality further. I know she was like this in the game, but she should be more than the beautiful blonde magician who's in love with the hero and doesn't want to hurt anyone.

The battle scenes were great, but I wish Captain Vyse would have found a real plan against the Jericho instead of letting Fina do the job. You made her too powerful in my opinion.

I also really liked Lawrence in you fic, just like I imagined him. I hope we'll learn more about him and about the 4 sylvites in another fic...

This is a great fic. Write some more like this.

Wow that was a relly good story!The ending/epilogue was good too.On a scale of 0/10 I'd say this deserves a 10/10.

I would like to tell you that this is one of the best fanfics I have read. I have always liked the Vyse and Fina pairing, and i'm glad you managed to do it without having Aika being the "odd girl out" (even if you had to kill her to do it )

Thank you for writing this awesome story, it was really a great read.