I loved your story and really want to know what happens next. This story is so exiting and youll never know what will happen next

I enjoyed the conversation between them about the names of the modes, and then loved the story of 'lefty', even funnier that the first part of yelling "Shotty" came from your younger brother. I think this is my favorite chapter just from those parts alone

don't you think you should update?

you never update you idiot!damn!update!

Not read yet, just adding to my watch and fav's, any JakKeira story is worth it, well done already

Please!! You must update! This is an excellent story and you left off just when I was really getting excited about it.

This is an AWESOME story! I love it! Please update soon! PLEASE!

Im happy I found this! Its one of the best J & D fan fics I've read in ahwile. ^^ And at least theres one more chapter before a hiatus. I hate hiatus', but I dont blame you. ^^ Anyways, Im deffenatly adding this to my Favs. Adios!

FINALLY!good story, i hate it when good stories go on hiatus, no offense, i'm just saying AWSOME story and continue ASAP

i hope it does i hated the jakxashlin pairing it was so gay!and why does keira hate ashlin now?

i have names for my guns too

they are

Boom (scatter)

Rapid (Vulcan Fury)

Blaster (Blaster)

and i can change Peacemaker

so your just going to let them walk in giant circles around the sewers

will they find everyone else i mean i know everyone is alive tho. never mind

I'll wait till your done with your other stories, but if you don't continue i'll get u ya hear i'll get u. lol. I just love the way Brutter talks. A huge smile came to my face when i saw brutter. See ya when ya update

this is really good!