even if its a dream or the the end their together:) so thats what matter:D i like this story it was very good. i cnt wait to read more of your stories. if your still writing escaflowne stories. Keep up the good work! xx

Great blend and use of emotion in this story. Well done.

aww so sweet...

she was only dreaming... our was she...

Wow! I think that this should be the beginning, but you don't have to if you don't want to. Anyways, great job!

Whoa, really good story. The description is really good, and so are the conversations; it's not just fluffy, pointless dialogue.

This is great! i think that this should be just the beginning! please keep writting!

Definatly the beginning!keep up the work

kool! soooo good, can't get enough

this is realy sad. what were you thinking when you wrote this?

Very good. Please put the last one up soon.

write more soon, he can't die!

wonderful! please continue, I am eager to read the third part!

WOW. That's all I can say- just WOW. Keep it up, this is sad but beautiful.

Awwwww! So, so sad! *sniff*

Well,..let me just say I like your use of word to describe emotions. The bleeding heart thing though It's gotta go whats up? Its not like he can't get her back, why doesn't he? I'm hoping this won't discourage you from posting the other chapters, but also I hope they have some romantic hope, after all romance is alive and well...in fanfiction any way.