Wow, just wow, I really really really loved this story. I am so glad to have read it. I loved how you ended it with Harry being hurt for once. I love how it wasn’t just a few days in the hospital wing like it always seems to be. Very good. Later dude.

You might be interested to know that Nagini's a girl. Great job with this, however!

I appreciate the highly prompt response, and wish you the best of luck with your new beta!

I also apologize for any offense I may have caused, and for the implication that you might have taken more than that once scene from MoM.

That aside, your story is wonderful, and I hope you continue to do better.

Cheers,
Jade Ai

REPLY TO JADE AI's REVIEW

The matter of the similarities in the Quidditch match of the 14th chapter has been cleared. Midnight Blue wrote to me and gave me her permission, saying she didn't mind the similarities in the least, that she was flattered I liked her scene so much that I used parts of her idea. Nonetheless, I will leave a note at the bottom of the revised chapter (when it'll come out, now that I have a beta) to thank Midnight Blue for her permission.

As for the rest of the story, I didn't base anything else off of "Mirror of Maybe". Our stories, characters and universes are different.

I hope this'll quell any future questions if not you can PM me.
Eternal Cosmos

I wasn't certain until I read up to chapter 14, but now I'm sure. That part of the chapter where Xiomara Hooch plays Quidditch with 'James Evans' and ends up flipping her broom - that's almost a direct 'lift' of a story idea from the Mirror of Maybe. That, coupled with her line of "Thank you" - also from the Mirror of Maybe, counts as plagiarism, unless you can prove that you either: 1. came up with the idea first (i.e. on your own), or 2. have received permission from Midnight Blue to use the idea.

This particular scene is only one of a series of scenes that I've noticed also occurs in the Mirror of Maybe, by Midnight Blue.

Please address this issue as soon as possible.

this vas FREAKIN' AMAZING! it vas the best story ever on this vebsite. i hope you make a sequel to it.

This story was absolutely awesome! I couldn't stop reading. Wonderful work. :)

nice^^ the first alternative univers I've read till the end thank you it was really great^^

When you said “Can you tell me how the HELL Voldemort got himself Nundus and Manticores?!” I read it "Can you tell me how the HELL Voldemort got himself /nudist/ manicores?"
Bad images... but, I thought I ought to share XD

Were you palnning on updating this chapter with the new books? Snape's patronus isn't a Raven, it's a Doe.

...If you ever decide to do some editing to this, I felt the need to point out that the Wolf's bane potion is supposed to be take once per day in the week leading up to the full moon, and that the drinker will transform into a normal wolf instead of a werewolf

http://harrypotter./wiki/Wolfsbane_Potion

woa this is such a fabulous fic...its warm yet sinister at times, sweet yet tragic...i really loved the syle of making harry dark but not evil..in jk rowling's version everyone is so naive...im glad in this version they are all fighting to kill and not just stunning...god bless :)

Can Someone please give me the summary of chapter 7? For some reason my computer won't load the page when i click next chapter at the chapter 6 page. I would really appreciate it.

can't wait to read more!

You are trying to convey that Harry is some kind of bad arse dark, but non evil person, that does what is needed, yet the torture was pointless beyond simple revenge, and just increases the chance of something happening and him getting away as did taking him alone. Of course, while I would not have involved Sirius or Lupin, since they are too close to the issue, you could have probably gotten Snape and Moody to help capture and interrogate the rat, before killing him.