Short, but very compelling. I liked.

THAT'S A NICE LITTLE STORY

Aww... bittersweet. Good story nonetheless.

Whoa. That's my first impression... I'm a really imaginative person and that story made such a visual that I almost cried. Don't get to happy though because it's not the best story I've ever read or anything but it was pretty damn good.

this was really good. but who was it about? D/L? OR A/C?

Great it's a post soon.

that was a wonderful story it made me shed some tears.

OHH..this is GREAT! Why is Lan in this condition?

U don't suck at writin at all. That is soo good...

Oh my goodness...That's so depressing...(sobs hysterically) (clears throat) Uh-anyways, I-Derek? But...how? Why? (sigh) Screw it...Excellent story, dear. I luved it! I give it a very enthusiastic 2 thumbs up!

Great story...but is is about Derek and Lan or Adam and Chloe?

That was soooo sad. You should to a "Pre-Sunshine of My Darkness" fic so we would know what happened Derek. Lan and Derek were meant to be and hopefully, since the show is gone, people will write more fics about them. :)

Sad but I always thought those two should have got together. Now you have to write a happy D/L story to make us all feel better...

what the heck? did he die or something? better not have. nu uh. bad bad. but your a good writer. write more happy derek and lan fics. pleeeease. if the shows gone. we need you.

It has promise but it needs to be elaborated upon. What happened to Derek (I am assuming its hiim)? I would like to read the "story" about this fic.