'Bad-fic' it may be, but it was amusing nonetheless. I'd have to say that I've enjoyed it.

~IGC t DM

yay, Garbage! woot woot! this story just keeps getting better! now you add Garbage! Special and Push It! yay!

loved it though whilst at the bar i did expect to get cath and sara action, still a great story though

OK - I have only been reading these a little while - bit of a newbie to this whole fanfic world but I have to say it... DAMN girl! YOU ROCK. Really. I mean DAMN!

"Well then, let's see..." She began loudly, screwing up her face in an exaggerated expression of thinking. "Carry the three... about... seven, no, wait... nine years."

This was so cute.

What a wonderful story. I'm sad to see it end. Mind faxing this over to TPTB to see if they can fit this in by the end of the season?

Great job. Good job of keeping our characters in character while they were acting completely out of character!

"Yeah, yeah. Cath had my phone, Nick had my phone... and all I wanted to do was talk to you. It's stupid, I just get emotional when I drink I guess."

All she wanted to do was talk to him? "All you wanted to do was talk to me?" He pressed on.

"Huh." Again, Grissom leaned back in the chair, attempting to dissect her words. "You're not still drunk now are you?" The thought struck him suddenly.

Sara nearly laughed, but quelled his fear. "I didn't have that much to drink, Griss."

"Good, well, what were you going to tell me. I'm here now, and I'm not going to judge you." He nearly smacked himself for how cliché he sounded.

"It's not important now." Sara attempted to brush it off, holding off on burying herself under her covers to ward off his questions. They'd probably still be asked anyway.

"Sara, it's important if you think you need to get drunk to talk to me. You can be honest with me wh-... Sara, just be honest with me."

"Okay, let's see. You're a bastard and sometimes I can't stand you. You treat me like I don't exist but you tell people that I'm a close friend. I can't stop thinking about you even when I'm away from the office, and no matter how hard I try I can't help but wonder what your lips feel like, what you're skin feels like it, what it feels like to hold- oh just never mind."

Grissom got up, sat on the bed and placed his hand in her hair, stroking it slowly. Her eyes widened to just about the size of saucers when he did so.

"You're right, I am a bastard, but it's only because I can't really have what I want, and if I got it, I wouldn't know what to do with it."

"What would that be?" Sara asked him indignantly.

He smiled and tucked a long strand behind her ear. She shivered.

"You. All of you."

I know that I copied at lot of this, but this is all so great. I loved every word of it. Sara's reaction to waking up with Grissom in her room was priceless. The end was very sweet.

"I'm sorry." She wept, defenses down do to her inebriation. "I'm sorry Griss, it just hurts, you know? To love you this much and be this close to you and have you pretending like you care." Her mouth choked out the words, lips dry from the booze coursing though her veins. "Oh, god... I didn't mean to say that. Pretend like you didn't hear any of that okay? Okay? Okay."

Uh...Not likely, Grissom won't be forgettng that anytime soon.

Another great chapter. So sweet of Grissom to stay. Can't wait to see what happens next.

"Grissom noticed that everytime the accented singer sang the "ah" portion of the song, that Sara swiveled her hips to the extreme, Nick matching her movements exactly. He raised a brow at the erotic picture they painted,"

Would have paid much money to see the look on Grissom's face.

"The beat of the music, however, was primal enough for the two women to dance together, causing their onlooker's jaws to drop... including Grissom.

He watched as Sara, eyes lidded, swiveled around Catherine, the blonde responding to her partner's movements. His eyes slid languidly down her body, his mind all the while screaming at him to stop, stop looking, stop feeling and most certainly stop drinking the double scotch that he still held in his hand."

LOL! Again, wish I was there to see that! Very fun chapter! Pretty hot and steamy in there. You think Grissom may have been a bit jealous? I think yes!

"Oh, we're... we're uhh... Cath, where are we again? Suede? Leather? Couldn't be Cotton." Greg laughed at Nick who appeared baffled. He shouted over to Catherine who was leaning up to whisper something into Warrick's ear. "Catherine!"

"Uh, Satin? Yeah, Satin." She quickly went back to seducing Warrick.

That there, was funny as hell!

Loved how Sara crying was enough to put Grissom into to action. Noone makes Sara cry!

"Nothing happened. Though Sara got a piece of metal... inserted into her stomach!"

Thinking scientifically, his face became stricken and he grabbed Sara's arm and pulled her closer to him. He gazed at her stomach, a flicker of light gleaming off of her navel. His eyes darkened, just a bit,"

Poor Grissom, thought somebody impaled his Sara. Was it just me and Catherine or was Grissom little turned on?

This is so not a bad fic! Keep it coming!

These guys are nuts when they are drunk and wild. Wish I was there! Nick better watch his back, ** Sara off while on the telephone with Grissom? That can't be good!

I know this is going to be another great story. You haven't disappointed me yet!

Great chapter! Hope you had a merry Christmas and happy New Year!

wow, I just have to say that I love every word of it, :)

This is such a wonderful story! At first, I was kind of put off by the night club idea, but it totally works. I love this story so much; I hope you write more soon! One more thing: a couple nights ago, I read Stalemate in a Sandbox and I absolutely loved it! It is one of the most incredible fanfictions I've read ever. Honestly, it is. But now I can't find it! It's not in the archive pages and I can't find it on your profile. Do you know where I could find it? I printed off the last four pages and I've been reading them over and over because I love them so much, and I really want to read the rest of it again, but I can't find it! Do you know where it is? Keep up the excellent work!

That was a really cool chapter. Wish I had something more specific to say. It's just that when you read a lot of G/S fanfic, you frequently get a lot of similar resolution scenes, and this was something new. A nice new look at these characters. Great update.

You are an amazing writer...seeing a new chapter of either of the two CSI stories you have going now literally makes my day...you are quickly becoming one of my favorites? Please keep up the good work.