this was beautiful...i teared up a little :'(

I think it's very good thank you

That was really, really good. And sad too!

This was excellent beyond words. I almost cried reading this. Wonderful job!

*dies from sadness*

*ressurects*

*rereads*

*dies from sadness again*

*repeats six times*

I've always loved Vivi. I've always loved black mages. But that... THAT was just beautiful... as confusing as it was :D

Beautiful. Beautiful sad, beautiful lovely, just beautiful. There is no other way to say it. Simply beautiful.

;_;

So cute and sad.

*patpats blackmage*

And yes, I could understand it perfectly well.

I love this one. The first time I read it, I had to go over a couple of things to make sure I got them right, that I understood, but I love the way you srote it. How the other Black Mages put their feelings and sensations as "orders" or "never-orders." And I love that way they describe Vivi as "dusty-quiet." Very fitting. This is one of my favorite stories to date.

I read this over... again.(too lazy to sign in) So nice! I can read this ten times and not get bored. Thank you! *sob* *sob*

VERY nice... just like 'Beneath', almost nicer. I love the way you ahve recreated Vivi in words, through third eprson or even other people's point of views. And yes, I msut agree; Final Fantasy is inspiring. Even without accenting on it, as a writer(amateur as I am), it's been one of those things which inspire my fics! Not to mention they're almost all FF. LOL

Great job! Keep it up!

Er, "influence of gravy"? Well, it turned out wonderful! So expressive...and stuff.

((9.9) that was . . . BEAUTIFULL! Omg, that was just sooooooo great! Wow -

*snifflesnuffle* WHAHAHA that is so sad *sniff* I have a confession to make I cryed my eyes out when I saw that scene Poor Vivi why do they do this to you. *grabs Vivi and hugs him while muttering about pain* *sniffsniff* Okay I'm done but this is good.

Read you fiction and it is so emotional. It is really nicely written.

You wrote this before you played it? Awesome! I'd bet anything that this is exactly what the developers were thinking when they made the scene!